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A Heart Can See

Dee Gold on Jun 29, 2008
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Written for my first boyfriend who was also the last because he is now my husband for five years. This one really came deep from my heart.

Knowing how you feel
Makes me so secure
It seems not real
But true, I’m sure.

Now, I really see
Your eyes says clearly
How you love me
You care for me, dearly.

Nothing will ever stop
Message from my heart
Direct like the map
And as sweet as a tart.

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  • Rachel Faye on Jun 30, 2008

    awwwww.

  • dee gold on Jun 30, 2008

    Thanks Rachel for reading my poem.

  • nobert soloria bermosa on Jul 26, 2008

    that’s what they call true love,lovely poem indeed

  • dee gold on Jul 28, 2008

    I appreciate your support.Thanks, nobert!

  • Joshua Risi on Jul 28, 2008

    Great poem, it seems at times that the heart has a bigger voice than the mouth. This poem describes that.

  • dee gold on Jul 29, 2008

    Joshua, thanks for taking the time to leave a comment.

  • cathy1978 on Jul 29, 2008

    thanks for reading my poem. And this one is exactly how I feel about my husband.

  • dee gold on Aug 1, 2008

    Hi cathy,I’m glad that you also took time to read mine.God bless you!

  • IcyCucky on Aug 1, 2008

    That’s a wonderful and lovely relationship!

  • dee gold on Aug 2, 2008

    You made me happy today, Icy.Thanks again!

  • jolene37 on Aug 6, 2008

    your writing is very good i love to read it hope youll read mine as well .

  • dee gold on Aug 6, 2008

    thanks jolene.don’t worry I’ll read some of your articles.

  • Lady Syxess on Aug 7, 2008

    How lucky you are to have found your one and only true love, beautiful words.He must’ve been flushed with emotions when you revealed it to him

  • dee gold on Aug 8, 2008

    thanks a lot lady

  • Ira Hayes on Aug 9, 2008

    Simple, sweet sentiment – nice job and well done.

  • dee gold on Aug 9, 2008

    Wishing you the best, Ira.

  • tonisan60 on Aug 9, 2008

    In spanish and Italian I do lot of rhymed poetry, but in English not yet, I am trying to improve my English in order to do so, because I love rhyme poetry, and this one is very rhythmic and melodic, thank you for sharing it, claps
    Infinitive kisses and sidereal hugs

  • dee gold on Aug 10, 2008

    I know you can, toni. I think you are dedicated person.

  • swapna on Aug 29, 2008

    very nice…..take care

  • dee gold on Aug 29, 2008

    thanks for your support,swapna.

  • leannehume on Nov 4, 2008

    Aw that is sooooo sweet!

  • Dee Gold on Nov 9, 2008

    leanne,
    thanks for leaving a comment.God bless you!

  • C Jordan on Nov 25, 2008

    Conveys love very well

  • Dee Gold on Nov 25, 2008

    I feel glad to read your comment,Thanks C Jordan.

  • Melody Arcamo Lagrimas on Dec 2, 2008

    Filled with sweet emotions, short as it is.

  • Dee Gold on Dec 4, 2008

    thanks melody and God bless

  • Adam Henry Sears on Dec 28, 2008

    This is cute! Thanks for sharing, Dee.

  • Dee Gold on Dec 29, 2008

    Hi Adam,thanks for your support.

  • M J katz on Jan 4, 2009

    Such a sweet and honest poem! Real and longlasting love is so hard to find that it should be celebrated daily when found! ^-^

  • Dee Gold on Jan 4, 2009

    I agree, M J katz

  • rutherfranc on Jan 17, 2009

    sooo romantic..

  • Dee Gold on Jan 17, 2009

    rutherfranc,
    I’m glad you think so.

  • Kate Smedley on Feb 24, 2009

    Very well expressed and knowing the background makes it more romantic.

  • clay hurtubise on Apr 5, 2009

    Nice work! Very sweet.
    Thanks,
    Clay

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