A Heavenly Whisper

Atanacio on Apr 23, 2010

Tags: after life, Angels, dead, drama, dream, grace, heaven

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Once dead…

Once dead,

he turned dizzy in circles,

illumination inside his head,

his senses slowly returned,

he saw an angel coming toward him,

clouds on the ground,

his spirit in the sky,

she knelt down,

he wanted to cry,

her face like an angel,

as he felt a rush of hope,

a magical dream,

a wonderous stream,

a heavenly whisper,

that hid the screams

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Comments (14)

LoveDoctor on Apr 23, 2010
Beautiful and heartfelt. Nice flow and imagery. “A heavenly whisper that hid the screams.”
deep blue on Apr 23, 2010
Seems like last episodes before an ending. I like the flow
ceegirl on Apr 23, 2010
love it
diamondpoet on Apr 23, 2010
Awesome as usual, That definitely the way I want to return when someone knock me senseless.
Earth Mother on Apr 23, 2010
Screams! Scary. I wonder if the screams were from Hell…
willie wondka on Apr 23, 2010
nice xx
Alive11 on Apr 23, 2010
Well presented stuff

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Thanks
Jimmy Shilaho on Apr 24, 2010
Very spiritual, keep it up.
Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Apr 24, 2010
Well you always keep me captivated. Thumbs up
sara20 on Apr 24, 2010
Interesting post with lost of fun and i know useful info. Thanks

Sara
aleah on Apr 25, 2010
nice twist at the end!
Evelyn M Carter on Apr 26, 2010
As always! an interesting and enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing some more of that mind of yours!
yes me on Apr 26, 2010
Well, they just get better and better you are the master craftsman…. cheers
Jenny C on Feb 24, 2012
an amazing piece

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