A short hot story to wet reader’s apetites into having steamy fun in the Sun.

I lay in the park on a hot summer’s day,

watching a beatiful lass as I lay,

on my stomach with my head on my arm,

I wonder if I could work on her with my charm.

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She with long blond hair is sat up reading a book,

ten feet away she smiles at me with a friendly look.

A light blouse and a knee length cotton dress,

with the sun shining through she cares netherless.

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The light revealing a shapely and beautiful form,

with the veiw that I have my body runs warm.

The sweat begins to glisten on her tanned skin,

my sexual juices get hotter and hotter within.

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We get talking and I get to know her name as Elaine,

and soon we sit together and my desires remain.

Together we agree to move somewhere private,

a serene and quiet corner we begin to relate.

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Falling in love with a strange beauty and she with me,

as evening comes, others have gone and now we are free,

to take this romance we strip further to nature,

us two youthful lovers with bodies to mature.

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We forget the heat of the sun for our burning desire,

to make love in the undergrowth as our bodies perspire,

with our juices flowing slip sliding away on our sweat,

she falls back on the grass with her loins so wet.

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Falling asleep after one more time, we wake up it’s now Dark

We get dressed, but it’s too late they have locked the park

“How do we get out?” we ask trying to find a way

But we didn’t care after that hot hot summer’s day.

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THE END

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  • payge on Jul 3, 2009

    Loved it Tim………had all the trappings of a great piece to read with plenty of imagination behind it.But then again,I do enjoy reading your work.

  • The Cinders on Jul 3, 2009

    I like how you built up the anticipation and I especially love the 6th stanza where it climaxes. But I think it could have been better if you hadn’t tried so hard to rhyme.
    _Bria

  • Dewan Golam Shafi Choudhury on Jul 6, 2009

    I really felt the hottness lol!

    Nice poem! Hopefully I’ll cool down now!

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