A dilapidated and forgotten house can hold so many memories which are not always good ones.

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The old house stood empty high up on the hill,

Overhung by an ancient oak tree so still.

Its roof agape, tiles hung by a thread,

Where once lay a child asleep in his bed.

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The rooms, empty and cold, hold memories so clear

Of a family whose happiness became lost in fear.

The doors off their hinges, the windows unglazed,

The chimney breast broken where a fire had once blazed.

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The kitchen wall stained from anger untold

When meals flew ‘cross the room as a row did unfold.

The echo of screams and in the corner a child

Crouching in terror, hearing language reviled.

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Now the mice chatter as they speed ‘cross the floor

And spiders build webs where once stood a door,

And all that remains in this house now so bare

Are the memories it holds of the folks who lived there.

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Christine Ramsay 6.5.11

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  • CHIPMUNK on May 6, 2011

    Wow! So beautifully written like the image

  • fishfry aka Elizabeth Figueroa on May 6, 2011

    The past, the memories.
    I find it is best to hold the memories…………..don’t physically visit.Great poem, hit me at the core.

  • Baijayanti Pradhan on May 6, 2011

    Memories are best to live.

  • Saurav Banerjee on May 6, 2011

    Excellent explaination. Equally wonderful picture. There’s always something unique in your writing!

  • Francois Hagnere on May 6, 2011

    Oh yes, Christine, if walls could talk, they certainly would tell lots of stories. Not always good ones, you are right. It’s so strange how we can feel the past in such places. This happened to me so many times, as you can imagine easily. I so much love old buildings and monuments. A moving post, thank you Christine.

  • gaby7 on May 6, 2011

    When an old gigantic house stands so dreadfully as I see in this photo with an empty floor virtually colonized by mice speeding about you know for sure that the only thing about it is the memory of its ancient past! This was poignant poem here my friend!

  • alexgadd on May 6, 2011

    From the picture, I can see that this house is derelict to say the least. Nice descriptive article as well. Thanks for sharing.

  • mtrguanlao on May 6, 2011

    Another great poem Miss Christine! I don’t want abandoned houses,they’re haunted,lol!

  • lapasan on May 6, 2011

    You vividly depicted the memory in that house.

  • Minaem on May 6, 2011

    Very nice written and beautiful photo!

  • webseowriters on May 6, 2011

    just lovely

  • Sourav on May 6, 2011

    Wonderful poetry!

  • Edsss on May 6, 2011

    Every house is full of memory! Like ours.. haha!

    awesome poem!

  • UncleSammy on May 6, 2011

    Nice Share

  • ravitej on May 6, 2011

    wonderful poetry.

  • Atanacio on May 6, 2011

    another one of your better shares :) Frank

  • Cyni1106 on May 6, 2011

    You write so beautifully! I enjoyed it brings back memories of haunted houses we played in when we were kids.

  • CHAN LEE PENG on May 6, 2011

    Memory always leaves a mark in one’s heart.

  • Stable on May 6, 2011

    Very vivid writing Christine – another great poem.

  • LoveDoctor on May 6, 2011

    You’ve painted a good picture of the scene.

  • yes me on May 6, 2011

    An excellent read this it could be a house anywhere, cheers Christine

  • Poetic Enigma on May 6, 2011

    Beautiful poem, so wonderfully composed. Thank you for sharing!

  • payaltyagi on May 6, 2011

    very nice

  • Minister Marlene on May 6, 2011

    Sad but beautiful poem. I like the pic. Empty homes that are boarded up or burnt out have a story. Perhaps some of the stories aren’t sad. I hate to think all the stories are sad. Maybe a family had a fire and evey one escaped.
    The they went to England, liked it so much they stayed. There they met the famous poet Christine Ramsey who became the daughters mentor. Years later the daughter becomes a famous writer and poet and dedicates her first book to C. Ramsey the woman who gave her a start by encouraging her to write.
    The fire that burnt out their home years ago was tragic but bought blessing to the family later.

  • Ruby Hawk on May 6, 2011

    Christine, I feel sure old houses could tell some interesting stories. Your poem is an interesting story in itself.

  • shakugan123 on May 6, 2011

    what a sad memory in that abandoned house :(

  • Tulan on May 6, 2011

    A good one, Christine, I too believe the past still has things to say.

  • galore on May 6, 2011

    great work

  • LCM Linda on May 6, 2011

    Interesting poem. I wonder what had happened in this giant abandoned house.

  • Starpisces on May 6, 2011

    a perfect poem once again.

  • Eunice Tan on May 6, 2011

    I want the house of memories. Sound romantic

  • Judy Sheldon on May 7, 2011

    Some houses are full of love and others are like the one you speak of, no wonder it fell apart!

  • Melody SJAL on May 7, 2011

    Captivating as ever, Christine.

  • crisdiwata on May 7, 2011

    This poem makes me remember my childhood days in my parents house. Aahhh, those memories were sweet. Your poem is captivating.

  • papaleng on May 7, 2011

    Another excellent poem . With that , I have my own reason why I am not leaving our ancestral home. I hate shedding tears by reminiscing what good memories can bring.

  • fat4lity on May 7, 2011

    nice poem :)

  • AshleyApathy on May 7, 2011

    thanks!

  • Peace Poet on May 7, 2011

    This is an excellent poem. The style is very natural and impressive. I like it.

  • No Share on May 8, 2011

    what a sad poem.=( It must be painful for the former owners of that house to see how neglected it looked right now

  • johnnydod on May 8, 2011

    Nice thoughts, Christine

  • Hettie on May 8, 2011

    A great poem Christine thank you.

  • Christine Ramsay on May 8, 2011

    Thank you so much for all your lovely comments.

  • Jason Hinshaw on May 9, 2011

    Great poem, you should look at mine!

  • anndavey650 on May 9, 2011

    Aw a lovely poem… without memories we are nothing and the empathy with past inhabitants you can find when you walk around some old houses is rather strange, but its a great look back into a slice of our history.

  • J M Lennox on May 9, 2011

    I love \’feeling\’ the history of very old dwellings. Thank you for bringing the story of one from your pen to life. Fabulous.

  • Val Mills on May 9, 2011

    Your poem gave me lots of visual images Christine. Wonderful topic to pen a poem to.

  • Phoenix Montoya on May 10, 2011

    I don’t like houses with sad memories, I just want to forget and consider those places as dreams. A beautiful, haunting write Christine xx

  • Phoenix Montoya on May 10, 2011

    I don\’t like houses with sad memories, I just want to forget and consider those places as dreams. A beautiful, haunting write Christine xx

  • Erin Miller on May 10, 2011

    Deep. Very deep. Great imagery in the poetry.

  • alvinwriter on May 10, 2011

    You can really feel the emotions in your chest when you read Christine’s poem.

  • mark ramsay on May 11, 2011

    I like that but it is so sad.

  • CA Johnson on May 11, 2011

    I really enjoyed your poem. It was sad, but beautiful.

  • PR Mace on May 12, 2011

    Sadly beautiful. I often wonder what memories the walls of old houses hold.

  • sunsetsunrise on May 13, 2011

    Another bittersweet masterpiece…Christine, you manage to evoke strong feelings and that is the whole purpose of poetry.

  • d1dezire on May 16, 2011

    Poignant

  • Coleen Hazeldine on May 17, 2011

    Beautiful!

  • T. S. GARP on May 24, 2011

    What a delightful poem that was very beautiful!

  • 1hopefulman on May 25, 2011

    Sad that in some houses there are no pleasant memories.

  • iloisabel on Jul 11, 2011

    good post!!!

  • revivor on Jul 21, 2011

    Great imagination!! You have captured something deeper here than in some of your lighter poems – is there a sequel? or a prequel???

    Loved it, revivor

  • Jacques Berkeley on Dec 6, 2011

    Excellent.

  • Lisa Marie Mottert on Apr 18, 2012

    Heartwarming and lovely:)

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