A Killer’s Advance

alc on Dec 23, 2009

Tags: alc, Beauty, death, emotions, kill, Life, money, murder, Thoughts, Wikipedia

Think…..

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I stand beyond your view today,

Yet, I will be found tomorrow.

I was abused, raped, and used my whole life,

Yet, no one every payed me any attention.

I will be noticed one way or the other,

Granting my story in the History books forever.

No matter how many I will take before satisfaction is met,

Power is soon to be in my view.

When will I strike, where will I hide?

A message needs to be unveiled,

I will find you and make all pay.

Money is what you life entails,

Advancing on those whom beauty prevails.

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jaysonv on Dec 23, 2009
nice post.. very unique.. Thanks myFriend!
Atanacio on Dec 23, 2009
an interesting piece here, well written and I give it two thumbs up
Debra. on Dec 23, 2009
A very intense and powerful piece! I like the style!
diamondpoet on Dec 23, 2009
The was very powerful, but your showing that you have to control not, good work.
Darla Cooke on Dec 23, 2009
A very interesting and emotionally written poem.
qasimdharamsy on Dec 23, 2009
Well written….
LiteraryPrincess on Dec 23, 2009
That was almost…frightening.
Authoress Terry E Lyle on Dec 23, 2009
Your poem displayed powerful emotions bordering on frightening accounts of your life. I felt your heart and mind in this wonderfully written piece…Blessing always my friend.
Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Dec 23, 2009
Always remain hopeful in what seems a bleak, hopeless situation. Stay encouraged. I previously signed in as a guest now I need to comment as a Triond member.
LOVELYHONEY on Dec 23, 2009
i wish u had read my articles like

COMMMENTS ON PREMARITAL SEX

FAR EARLIER ALAS GO AHEADa nd place those evil events behind u

i know people who were raped at five

can u imagine itand their plight
AlmaG on Dec 23, 2009
Very intense emotions mirrors this poem. Great poem
Jay Bre on Dec 24, 2009
very moving, great job
Seth Frederiksen on Dec 24, 2009
bravo, brilliantly done. a pure work of art. well done.
mkd1788 on Dec 25, 2009
great work man..really great..
ladydryle on Dec 26, 2009
this is sad and i can feel you, the message you want to convey in this piece stab my heart…nicely written…
lillyrose on Dec 29, 2009
The intensity strode through strongly! well done.
Eddie0flare on Dec 30, 2009
woah,nice post,:)

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