Love note: a simple, romantic gesture. Where has chivalry gone?

Lips
 softly
  linger,
   brushing
    gently
     upon
      porcelain
       fingers…

Artwork by nemling

Velvet rose petals,

Unfurling in sunlit hues ~

Sighs in the garden.

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  • momofplenty on Jun 7, 2012

    Oh how beautiful… makes me think of those young love days… <3

  • girishpuri on Jun 7, 2012

    awesome

  • Shirley Shuler on Jun 7, 2012

    Hi Lady Sunshine, such beautiful words, it gives me hope that chivalry is not dead.

  • faizalhuda on Jun 8, 2012

    Amazing…

  • sabanawaz on Jun 8, 2012

    awesome poetry

  • fishfry aka Elizabeth Figueroa on Jun 8, 2012

    very romantic

  • evcalangian on Jun 8, 2012

    I like it. Beautiful poem. :-)

  • Eiddwen on Jun 9, 2012

    Another truly beautiful poem.

  • Callysta on Jun 9, 2012

    excellent work. it is remembering me when i was in high school

  • sheilanewton on Jun 11, 2012

    Yes indeed – where HAS chivalry gone??? Excellent post – beautiful poetry, Lady Sunshine.

  • Tiki33 on Jun 11, 2012

    This is beautifully expressed. I love the animation.

  • SharifaMcFarlane on Jun 12, 2012

    Aww

  • Chris Bailie on Jun 16, 2012

    Beautiful, thank you for sharing.

  • lauralu on Jun 18, 2012

    Wow I remember that first thrill so romantic thanks

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