A Ladies Perspective

lxdollarsxl on Jan 22, 2011

Looking at the other side of the coin.

As daybreak dawns

Frost upon the lawns

The cold begins to bite

Waking up not a pretty sight

Hair tousled all over the place

I get moving at some pace

Running late once again

Having to hurry to catch my train

Knickers bra and dress

Straighten myself up, what a mess

Foundation, powder and lip gloss

Oh, dropped the nail varnish, now I am cross

A little eyeliner and pencilled brow

This repair job ready right now

Comb raked quickly through my hair

Look in the mirror to compare

High heels oh these sling backs

Walking I make little pointed tracks

Well I am ready to hit the road

Wait, what day is it? I implode

Darn, Sunday a day to rest

Scream, all right, it is off my chest

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Comments (10)

anndavey650 on Jan 22, 2011
LOL brilliant!
dloriginal on Jan 22, 2011
That was just perfect. So many will agree.
GameLive on Jan 22, 2011
this is called a poem.awesome
mtrguanlao on Jan 22, 2011
Haha,that’s what ladies can do to men! Nice poem!
The Quail 1957 on Jan 22, 2011
Brilliant poem! Well Done!

I’ll be commenting on a lot more of your articles soon, as I have been extremely busy writing and finishing my novels for the last few days.
Tulan on Jan 22, 2011
Oh, no, not on a Sunday, that would be bad.
Yovita Siswati on Jan 23, 2011
Very funny. I can relate to this! Great work, very brilliantly-written.
Carolyn Cordon on Jan 23, 2011
Lot’s of fun!
Freethinking on Jan 23, 2011
That is so funny because several years ago I had convinced my wife it was Monday and she started her weekly routine. Needless to say, I was in the dog house quite a while.
Michal Dorcak on Jan 25, 2011
Good poem, interesting.

Hi there!