A boy aged 14 yrs, writes a letter to his father about many interesting issues…..

My dear father ,

I  miss you my father

I want to hug you 

I again want to become the same small child

To whom you always loved

Now i find , you remain irritated with me

You are not happy with my activities

You are always annoyed with me

Father , i am 14 now

I  am not the same old loving child

You are not realizing

The changes ,  i am suffering from

Did you forget your adolescence days

when you were also  at  the top of the world

Please remember ,

I want to enjoy my life at it’s   maximum 

I  have started dreaming in the days only

I want  to attain heights and heights

I enjoy outings , parties and sharing with friends

My study room does not attract me

What has happened to me

I don’t know my father

Please help me

Please love me in the same old way 

Please  i want to sit with you , i want to share with you

Please guide me , what is right and what is wrong ?

Don’t maintain distance with me

I understand , you are not liking my activities  but

Please support  me father

Please become my best friend

Please guide me 

Please share with me

Please hug me

I miss you 

i love you….

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  • mdrkarim7 on Oct 28, 2011

    I love my father too.

  • Muzammil196 on Oct 28, 2011

    :) … Good letter. :) Happy life dear!

  • Aroosa Gloomy on Oct 28, 2011

    Clicked my heart straight.

  • Saurav Banerjee on Oct 28, 2011

    Touchy!

  • Ram Bansal on Oct 28, 2011

    Quite sentimental yet truthful..

  • Dehan Nathaniel on Oct 28, 2011

    hmmmm

  • jayababy on Oct 28, 2011

    Nice.

  • lovinglyoursjuny on Oct 28, 2011

    Lovely poem for a father :)

  • girishpuri on Oct 28, 2011

    thanks

  • foxpete88 on Oct 28, 2011

    lovely poems…thanks

  • iva75cpb on Oct 28, 2011

    Not liking son’t activities doesn’t mean the fathet doesn’t love him. However only aftet we have a child we fully understand our parent’s feelings.

  • Nxwtypx on Oct 28, 2011

    Adolescence is tough.

  • deedaG50 on Oct 28, 2011

    No activity of a son can chage the love of a father. It takes growing up and being a father one day to understand that truth.

  • gaby7 on Oct 28, 2011

    I have two teen age boys! I must open my mind to this letter! Thanks grir!

  • erwinkennythomas on Oct 28, 2011

    perceptive!

  • Ruby Hawk on Oct 28, 2011

    It’s true, many times as our children grow older we forget they still need our love and support.

  • FX777222999 on Oct 28, 2011

    Like this article, very touching.

  • goodwriter91 on Oct 28, 2011

    oh it’s a great letter

  • binyumanyun on Oct 28, 2011

    Nice share..

  • dwisuka on Oct 29, 2011

    very touching.

  • aheed411 on Oct 29, 2011

    I love my parents very much

  • aheed411 on Oct 29, 2011

    I love my parents very much
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  • Sunjhini on Oct 29, 2011

    awww what a touching write

  • lapasan on Oct 29, 2011

    A touching letter.

  • chitragopi on Oct 29, 2011

    Good, reflects my sentiments!

  • papaleng on Oct 29, 2011

    touching indeed. Who is the boy?

  • nurzaira on Oct 29, 2011

    emm touching..

  • ittech on Oct 29, 2011

    touching

  • Likha on Oct 30, 2011

    Very touching poem. Growing up is not easy so we surely need our parents to guide and love us.

  • darlena on Oct 31, 2011

    very sensitive and touching

  • Eliza26 on Oct 31, 2011

    So sweet!

  • yes me on Nov 3, 2011

    Nice lines here cheers

  • Kristie Claar on Nov 4, 2011

    Beautiful, I want always to remain close to all my children.

  • rajaryanme on Nov 4, 2011

    A very touching poem.

  • ittech on Nov 4, 2011

    ncie thanks

  • CutezSoNia on Nov 5, 2011

    touching indeed.

  • misterdd on Nov 5, 2011

    Very nice

  • SharifaMcFarlane on Nov 5, 2011

    The love may not change but we should always be consistent about showing our loved ones we love them, and not assume that they know.

  • Mohamed Abdel Fattah Hussein on Nov 5, 2011

    Good piece of writing

  • FX777222999 on Nov 6, 2011

    Very touching, I felt your heart beating so fast while writing this piece.

  • dwisuka on Dec 25, 2011

    revisiting

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