He told me that he love me but then he cheated and shatterd me for life:’(

You once told me you loved me,

That built me up and made me whole,

But i soon felt that deep within you really hated me,

You soon proved my thoughts right when like a piece of glass you,

Shattered me!

Ever so suddenly!

my heart hit the ground and shattered beneath your feet,

But you could’nt care less as my heart lay broken,

And my mind fractured,

A new diamond to love,

And you made clear you’d love this one,

And treasure it with your life,

As i looked on your words killed me,

Because i treasured you and you once told me the lie that you loved me.

By Paige Adelaide

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Comments (4)
  • sandie on Dec 20, 2009

    sadly these men are not a few, they use people to get what they want then they move on, cruel as they are, they give a good man a bad name.

  • alc on Dec 20, 2009

    Sad how some people act and think! Thanks for the point and the share!

  • Christine Ramsay on Dec 21, 2009

    A very emotional write. It is so hard to recover from a broken love affair.

    Christine

  • Darla Cooke on Dec 21, 2009

    Very sad!

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