A poem I wrote when I was 13 about the world. tell me what you think.

When attacked with fire and heat we react with what was brought upon us
Yet when injustice is clear and in our favor we make not a fuss
If god himself came and revealed to us the truth
Some deny it if it isn’t what they coveted and so be it their youth
I man who wishes better of the world and doesn’t start within
Is a man with no commitment to his life and there for made a sin
So listen oh mankind and learn from your mistake
Shed your skin of deception and awake
Surely no man can be perfect and surely not all wise
Still has god not given us ears of gold and silver eyes
So be it then let us die with our brother’s blood in our hands
Or let the world flourish with serenity and let it be known throughout the lands
Let it be known that together we rise as all for one and one for all
Or we well be doomed to the ground upon which we fall

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  • Ebony Oliver on Mar 20, 2011

    Well said this is a nice poem about the world.

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