Attempt at tanka (5-7-5-7-7) form of poetry.

How much is a life?
A thousand bucks? Or a million?
How can one measure
And put a value on life
When they don’t value their own

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  • Papa Sparks on Oct 22, 2009

    Tanka very much.

    Good one, too!

  • Jenny Heart on Oct 22, 2009

    Like it!

  • raman13 on Oct 22, 2009

    excellent

  • papaleng on Oct 22, 2009

    Excellent! you did it.

  • Sourav on Oct 22, 2009

    Nice to read a Tanka poem here… well done!

  • ken bultman on Oct 22, 2009

    You accomplished your Tanka Toy but I don’t know who they are. Or maybe I do.

  • cutedrishti8 on Oct 22, 2009

    Excellent work..

  • Ruby Hawk on Oct 22, 2009

    Well done,

  • deep blue on Oct 23, 2009

    A nice well thought point to ponder. I’m caught.

  • Lee Ness on Oct 23, 2009

    Very true and to the point. Excellent work from you.
    Lee ness

  • Jane Jane on Oct 23, 2009

    well said and nice tanka. haven’t heard of tanka before.

  • Lostash on Oct 23, 2009

    Splendid!

  • Shirley Shuler on Oct 26, 2009

    Hi Lady Sunshine, so very sad but true!

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