A Likeable Love

T. S. Lewis on Feb 24, 2010

Tags: center of my universe, likes, love, reflecting

To love her is nice but sometimes liking who she is lets her know she is your universe.

Intrigued beyond imagining
The look in your eyes
Spoke volumes
Of what was once a vacuum
The meaning of my life
Is named with your definition
A picturesque explanation
Revealing an omniscient fact
Your love is my universal center
I feel its core
When your head lays upon my chest
I feel its heat
Far away
And my thoughts are longing
Radiating with unrest
An apocalyptic catalyst
Bringing us close to disaster
Only to save us from an end
The brink of comprehension
When a man discovers
How to love beyond superficial
Reaching into the depths of reflection
Seeing the woman he loved for so long and liking what he sees

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chellsy on Feb 24, 2010
its a great poetry
8Shei8 on Feb 24, 2010
Man, I like to ask your wife how she tamed you Beautiful poem. Any women would wish this poetry was dedicated to her.
TS Lewis on Feb 24, 2010
Thank You 8Shei8 your comments are always a highlight in my day.
ceegirl on Feb 24, 2010
a lovely poetry
Hepsi.M on Feb 24, 2010
wow..!! we can feel the real love beneath the words of this poem.
well written.
drelayaraja on Feb 24, 2010
Lovely and passionate poetry.
LoveDoctor on Feb 25, 2010
This is beautiful and spells true love and passion. “Acopalytic catalyst.”
Christine Ramsay on Feb 25, 2010
This is a really powerful piece. Well done.

Christine
Kate Smedley on Feb 25, 2010
That’s really beautifully done and so touching.
diamondpoet on Feb 25, 2010
Powerful piece and very powerful words, what woman could resist a man who speak like that, I wife is lucky.
Starpisces on Feb 25, 2010
and I agree with 8shei8…
Darla Cooke on Feb 25, 2010
Very nice poem!
Marie Antoinette on Feb 25, 2010
These are beautiful and sweet words, love this poem.
giftarist on Feb 25, 2010
Pretty passionate and lovely. Good work!
AlmaG on Feb 26, 2010
Excellent!
mkd1788 on Feb 27, 2010
such a lovely poem..
qasimdharamsy on Mar 1, 2010
Lovely….

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