Seventh time my life in despair; lucky number is to discriminate affair.

Seventh time my life in despair

Lucky number is to discriminate affair

How could impossible love be fair?

Now and its past defines future glare

Challenging the will of divinity

Feeling as if competitor of identity

 Succumb to believe enormously

My Life is an ultimate anxiety

This is a stand I should fulfil and command

Keeping it forever is a noble demand

Just like my counts of one to six loves’ reprimand

This is just the beginning of raining deprived land

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  • CutestPrincess on Apr 15, 2009

    a well written poem with a strong message…

  • Dee Gold on Apr 18, 2009

    cool

  • freaky4jay on Apr 26, 2009

    this is awesome keep it up.

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