Search no more, love is knocking at the door.

Why do young girls struggle with feelings of unworthy?

What detour sign did they follow leading them from streets of bliss

arriving at an apathetic city where by-standers  pretend not to care.

Lost yet full of direction not seeing what was best

when they should have turned left

Stop where you are. Eventually, help will find you.

Your lover hears your heart’s cry and is desperately looking.

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  • lonewolf13 on Dec 7, 2009

    I got tired of looking… hence, the tag name.

  • LoveDoctor on Dec 7, 2009

    Lol. comment above. I don’t look either. When a guy is interested, he will pursue you just like the persistent ones that keep chasing you even though you have made it clear that you don’t feel the same way. I wonder why women even bother chasing men who continue treating them like crap. Good poetry.

  • 8Shei8 on Dec 7, 2009

    I was once one of those girls :)

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