I want to pour out feelings and empty my heart from emotions tonight. I want to wake up tomorrow with emptiness; it might help me understand what you have done yesterday.

In every life, they say ONE PERFECT LOVE, comes your way 

              1

I don’t know what to say,

Yesterday you hurt me so badly.

I ignored the feeling of rejection,

No matter how it hurts me so.

Because my heart say’s I love you.

                2

Again, today you did the same thing.

Never replied to my messages and pleading,

Are you tired, do you want some space to breathe in?

Want a break for three months or so,

If that is your wish, shall I grant you or no?

              3

Tomorrow I do not know,

I know you will be there as I am here.

Will I wake up with tears saying good morning my heart?

Shall I hope for a surprise from you my dearest love?

Coz, I have faith my destiny bestowed upon you and that is true!

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Comments (18)
  • LoveDoctor on Nov 4, 2011

    You know what is like to be in love. It’s the most incredible feeling in the world and it can also bring us a lot of pain. And I tell you this like you were my little sister. Do not ever allow a man to make you feel inferior or treat you like you didn’t exist. Don’t ever give a man the opportunity to toy with your emotions or to have you as his backup plan.As young women, we are worth so much and sometimes we forget this. There is value in you already because you are a child of God. When the right man comes along, you will know it and feel it in your heart because he will make you feel like you are the most special woman in his life.

  • erwinkennythomas on Nov 4, 2011

    be hopeful! as they say, “things always have a way of working out.”

  • Rosettaartist1 on Nov 4, 2011

    a well written piece.

  • ittech on Nov 4, 2011

    well written thanks

  • rgreenfield on Nov 4, 2011

    very nice… thanks for sharing.

  • mtrguanlao on Nov 4, 2011

    Well,it’s not your loss but his’!
    I love the poem,felt the pain :(

  • VoIP on Nov 4, 2011

    Sorry to hear this. I hope it works out. Nice write.

  • prospectboy on Nov 4, 2011

    You have written a very nice and heartfelt poem here, but I agree with what Love Doctor said. Don’t let any guy use you, and make you feel worthless. You are much more valuable than that. Best wishes.

  • naruto100 on Nov 4, 2011

    Very good and well written poem.

  • Suni51 on Nov 4, 2011

    That guy must either be fool or not in a position to get your messages. If he is not caring for her, she too should do the same. But this was a nice poem.

  • lapasan on Nov 5, 2011

    Nice poem.

  • lovinglyoursjuny on Nov 5, 2011

    Thank you guys for your comments and advise…. :)

  • Sreekala on Nov 5, 2011

    Well written and touching too

  • papaleng on Nov 5, 2011

    So touching, guess, you have to move on.

  • beingwell on Nov 5, 2011

    Thanks for sharing.

  • ittech on Nov 6, 2011

    nice thanks for this

  • Boyka on Nov 6, 2011

    I Like It

  • lovinglyoursjuny on Jan 27, 2012

    thanks for your comments guys :)

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