Desire.

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The evening sings its lullaby,

as a racing heart beats its tune.

Tranquil flow of the creek nearby,

dancing with an ill-fated curse.

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Splendid sky with the ghastly moon.

Her tears, lovely sparkle of stars.

Glorious hope has ended too soon,

Alas, her monster, she faces.

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Not a feature of a demon-

no fangs, no claws, no darkened wings.

A mortal man of flesh and blood,

distorted shadow of her lust.

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The monster remains a lover,

as he craves for earthly desires.

Pretty girl weeps for her stalker,

no sooner it will be over.

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Such anguish to resist his smell.

His breathing chest, her deepest thirst.

Her monster into a human,

he gapes into her crimson eyes.

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The evening sky darkens in gloom,

ancient spells take dominion.

As maiden becomes predator,

her lover looks upon his doom.

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Not anymore as his passion,

but a baleful  form of a beast!

Great terror clears his obsession,

and greedily, she claims his heart.

`

(c) Phoenix Montoya @ October 29, 2010

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  • Jimmy Shilaho on Oct 29, 2010

    Very pretty lines.

  • ashan1614 on Oct 29, 2010

    So who is really the monster? The man who was simply looking to fulfill his lust, or the maiden who captures his heart?

  • johnnydod on Oct 29, 2010

    Tranquil flow of the creek nearby

    Beautiful poem I love your use of pros

  • ishinimrod on Oct 29, 2010

    Well written article.. Keep it up!

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Oct 29, 2010

    Lovely, and wonderfully written plot too.

  • lillyrose on Oct 29, 2010

    Wow… this turned my flesh to goose bumps. I was utterly captured under your spell. Beautifully written sweetheart and a really enchanting read. xxx

  • BC Doan on Oct 29, 2010

    Love, love, this part: “A mortal man of flesh and blood,

    distorted shadow of her lust.” Beautifully worded, which I can also relate!

  • Kaye TM on Oct 29, 2010

    lovely poem. i like the flow…

  • Likha on Oct 29, 2010

    You really have the talent for poetry. Mabuhay ka.

  • Mr Ghaz on Oct 29, 2010

    wonderful poem..loved this..really enjoyed it. agree, you’re so talented on poetry my friend :)

  • yes me on Oct 30, 2010

    Another good post cheers Montoya

  • Ruby Hawk on Oct 31, 2010

    A good one for Halloween.

  • Precious Illusions on Nov 2, 2010

    the macabre setting depicted by your words is impressive… and such elusive words that everyone can decipher them in their own perception, which is the essence of poetry. :)

  • Starpisces on Nov 3, 2010

    wow. well expressed…. the monster is also a lover?…haha.

  • Tulan on Nov 3, 2010

    scary,

  • Ubel Ein on Nov 18, 2010

    Oh, this is a little dark and I love it, Phoenix!! BRAVO!!!

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