A Man Gets a New Motto, Limerick

lauralu on Jun 4, 2012

Tags: bar, Kids, Multiple Births, Playpen

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Limerick Five Lines, Strict Rhyme.
First Two and Last Rhyme, Middle Two Rhyme.

There once was a man named Clarence Otto.

He met his true love in a grotto.

It was a bar called the playpen

He didn’t realize his fate then.

A mortage a wife and six kids now his lotto

Forget love in bars his new motto.

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jennifer eiffel01 on Jun 4, 2012
I love it!
Lisa Marie Mottert on Jun 4, 2012
This is wonderful!
girishpuri on Jun 4, 2012
awesome
Wrath Warbone on Jun 4, 2012
Too funny! Too true to life!
zaugis on Jun 4, 2012
cool
Kharla Jolly on Jun 4, 2012
I love it, Laura LOL Those are party animals, if I ever saw any! God Bless
Kharla Jolly on Jun 4, 2012
I love it, Laura LOL Those are party animals, if I ever saw any! God Bless
Lorna Z on Jun 4, 2012
I love it.
Lorna Z on Jun 4, 2012
I love it too
gaby7 on Jun 4, 2012
Cool! Very Interesting!
stevetheblogger on Jun 4, 2012
Brilliant absolutely Brilliant and what a wonderful motto. Look forward to your next.
Best Wishes
stevetheblogger
Moses Ingram on Jun 4, 2012
Cute.
erwinkennythomas on Jun 4, 2012
amazingly accomplished
Martin Kloess on Jun 4, 2012
you’ve been busy
Ruby Hawk on Jun 4, 2012
LOL, that\’s a good one.
Lady Sunshine on Jun 4, 2012
LOL. Cute pic!
SharifaMcFarlane on Jun 4, 2012
Lol
Made me smile
sabanawaz on Jun 5, 2012
true to life! LOL
blanka on Jun 5, 2012
Excellent piece of writing. If I found my wife in a grotto, though, it wouldn’t make much of a difference. I’d love her still, and never go back there – I won’t have to.
avissado on Jun 5, 2012
nice one
blanka on Jun 5, 2012
Excellent piece of writing. If I found my wife in a grotto, though, it wouldn’t make much of a difference. I\’d love her still, and never go back there – I won\’t have to.
Molly Girl 822 on Jun 5, 2012
Really enjoyed this one! Thanks!
Samsara on Jun 6, 2012
That’s a great and fun little rhyme!
Samsara on Jun 6, 2012
What a great and fun little poem!
Dreamy777 on Jun 6, 2012
awesome
AINIEE on Jun 6, 2012
very nice
Sunjhini on Jun 6, 2012
well written
Eiddwen on Jun 6, 2012
A brilliant limmerick.
Eiddwen on Jun 6, 2012
A brilliant limmerick .
Tiki33 on Jun 6, 2012
Wonderful job!
Safa on Jun 7, 2012
Laura you have become an excellent poet…Well done!

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