Limerick Five Lines, Strict Rhyme.
First Two and Last Rhyme, Middle Two Rhyme.

There once was a man named Clarence Otto.

He met his true love in a grotto.

It was a bar called the playpen

He didn’t realize his fate then.

A mortage a wife and six kids now his lotto

Forget love in bars his new motto.

 

 

 

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  • jennifer eiffel01 on Jun 4, 2012

    I love it!

  • Lisa Marie Mottert on Jun 4, 2012

    This is wonderful!

  • girishpuri on Jun 4, 2012

    awesome

  • Wrath Warbone on Jun 4, 2012

    Too funny! Too true to life!

  • zaugis on Jun 4, 2012

    cool ;)

  • Kharla Jolly on Jun 4, 2012

    I love it, Laura LOL Those are party animals, if I ever saw any! God Bless

  • Kharla Jolly on Jun 4, 2012

    I love it, Laura LOL Those are party animals, if I ever saw any! God Bless

  • Lorna Z on Jun 4, 2012

    I love it.

  • Lorna Z on Jun 4, 2012

    I love it too

  • gaby7 on Jun 4, 2012

    Cool! Very Interesting!

  • stevetheblogger on Jun 4, 2012

    Brilliant absolutely Brilliant and what a wonderful motto. Look forward to your next.
    Best Wishes
    stevetheblogger

  • Moses Ingram on Jun 4, 2012

    Cute.

  • erwinkennythomas on Jun 4, 2012

    amazingly accomplished

  • Martin Kloess on Jun 4, 2012

    you’ve been busy

  • Ruby Hawk on Jun 4, 2012

    LOL, that\’s a good one.

  • Lady Sunshine on Jun 4, 2012

    LOL. Cute pic!

  • SharifaMcFarlane on Jun 4, 2012

    Lol
    Made me smile ;-)

  • sabanawaz on Jun 5, 2012

    true to life! LOL

  • blanka on Jun 5, 2012

    Excellent piece of writing. If I found my wife in a grotto, though, it wouldn’t make much of a difference. I’d love her still, and never go back there – I won’t have to.

  • avissado on Jun 5, 2012

    nice one

  • blanka on Jun 5, 2012

    Excellent piece of writing. If I found my wife in a grotto, though, it wouldn’t make much of a difference. I\’d love her still, and never go back there – I won\’t have to.

  • Molly Girl 822 on Jun 5, 2012

    Really enjoyed this one! Thanks!

  • Samsara on Jun 6, 2012

    That’s a great and fun little rhyme! :)

  • Samsara on Jun 6, 2012

    What a great and fun little poem! :)

  • Dreamy777 on Jun 6, 2012

    awesome

  • AINIEE on Jun 6, 2012

    very nice

  • Sunjhini on Jun 6, 2012

    well written

  • Eiddwen on Jun 6, 2012

    A brilliant limmerick.

  • Eiddwen on Jun 6, 2012

    A brilliant limmerick .

  • Tiki33 on Jun 6, 2012

    Wonderful job!

  • Safa on Jun 7, 2012

    Laura you have become an excellent poet…Well done!

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