Each night as the man went to bed
He thanked God that he wasn’t dead
Before count of three
To dreamland he’d flee
He might as well be wife then said

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  • Chris Bailie on Jul 30, 2012

    Great Limerick, thank you.

  • Nxwtypx on Jul 30, 2012

    Clever, my friend.

  • jennifer eiffel01 on Jul 30, 2012

    This guy is me, though I am a woman. I don\’t even remember getting into bed because i take so many sedating medicines I fall immediately asleep and I sleep with a bright light on because my mom either likes me to be up when she goes to sleep or have my light on because I think she is afraid without daddy here

  • lauralu on Jul 30, 2012

    Witty and funny too

  • Jswana on Jul 30, 2012

    Very clever and funny too. :)

  • elee on Jul 30, 2012

    nice thanks

  • smokychristine on Jul 30, 2012

    Love these laughs you’re giving us.

  • Kharla Jolly on Jul 30, 2012

    LOL If he doesn’t stop ignoring his wife, that deep sleep might become a permanent mishap! Good limerick for sure, I enjoyed it.

  • evcalangian on Jul 31, 2012

    It is funny. Thank you.:-)

  • Lynn Hollis on Jul 31, 2012

    Very entertaining…with a hint at reality.

  • observer1 on Jul 31, 2012

    The guy’s been hard at work all day – give him a break! (Yes, I know his wife has too). Nice one.

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