Fit for Valentine’s Day.

Allow me to beat

with eternal love

to throb with your own heartbeat.

Let me pulsate

with pure joy

to delight you with my music.

Take my rhythm

as tender whispers

of my love and devotion.

Free me

with your love,

teach me

how to love,

and show me

what to love.

Take me as I am;

handle me with care;

shower me with devotion;

bathe me with desire;

and love me with all your heart.

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  • Glynis Smy on Feb 2, 2009

    lovely

  • C Jordan on Feb 2, 2009

    Very romantic.

  • clay hurtubise on Feb 2, 2009

    Nice piece.
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • papaleng on Feb 2, 2009

    lovely and romantic..

  • Darla Smith on Feb 2, 2009

    Very romantic and perfect for Valentine’s Day.

  • M Stokes on Feb 2, 2009

    Sweet!

  • YolieM on Feb 2, 2009

    This is beautiful.

  • poetic enigma on Feb 2, 2009

    This is lovely,
    and very romantic

  • MJ Taylor on Feb 2, 2009

    I’m glad your geared up for V-day. As for me, it maybe a lonely one; sob,sob. But I have an Idea, if I learn this poem of by heart, I could speak these wonderful words to a lady of my dreams and the day may not be so lonely after all. Be still my beating heart.

  • Darlene McFarlane on Feb 2, 2009

    Very nicely done, Melody.

  • Bo Russo on Feb 2, 2009

    Melody,my first read of you,I liked it quite a bit.I’m supposed to be taking a Triond break,but still checking in a little.Really liked this.

  • rutherfranc on Feb 2, 2009

    valentine`s day is in the air.. this is a very romantic piece

  • PR Mace on Feb 3, 2009

    Lovely piece.

  • Joni Keith on Feb 3, 2009

    I’m with MJ. I don’t have a valentine to call my own. Reading poetry such as this makes me wish I did. This is very passionate and quite romantic.

  • nobert soloria bermosa on Feb 3, 2009

    lovely wish,happy hearts day

  • Inna Tysoe on Feb 6, 2009

    Very romantic.

    Inna

  • eddiego65 on Feb 8, 2009

    Lovely!

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