Dance two and two, with me.

Are you ready for my kiss, tonight?
And the magic of a full moonlight
Its reflection gently moves
Through the motion of the sea
Its beauty ever glowing,
An alabaster fantasy

Can you stop beside my shoulder?
Can you pass me a playful wink?
And, make my cheeks slightly flush,
A radiant soft pink

When you turn away to go
Am I in your fondest thoughts?
Am I dancing in your memory?
Are your day dreams filled with visions
Of, only you and me?

Can I take you in my arms?
Can I spin you “round and “round?
Will you take this unknown journey
Until together we miraculously are found

Will you finally be the true love
I’ve dreamt my whole life for?
An overpowering passion
That make two hearts always long for more.

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  • Dee Huff on Apr 16, 2008

    This is lovely Liane. It’s like a floaty dreamy dance.

  • nobert soloria bermosa on Apr 16, 2008

    wow very romantic one,
    it’s really nice to be in love.

  • IcyCucky on Apr 16, 2008

    Beautiful images..and lovely

  • Ed Moore on Apr 16, 2008

    Terrific! What a great opening line. This is so dreamy. It’s every man’s fantasy. Nice job.

  • Darlene McFarlane on Apr 16, 2008

    I agree with Ed, a wonderful first line. It hooked me. You did a beautiful job, Liane. I love it!

  • Ruby Hawk on Apr 16, 2008

    Another beautiful poem, well done, Take care, Ruby

  • R.B. Parsley on Apr 16, 2008

    Liane,
    This is sooo beautiful. The words put the images in my head of two people inlove. How wonderful!!! Excellent writing. Great job!

    Randy

  • ANDY-N on Apr 17, 2008

    Now I’m all worked up! Thanks Liane!

  • KathySpring on Apr 17, 2008

    Another wonderful piece…dreamy and passionate
    I’ve missed your poetry glad to see you post some more
    KathySpring

  • Judy Sheldon on Apr 17, 2008

    Makes my heart skip a beat. mmmmmmm

  • quiet voice on Apr 17, 2008

    …Hi, very, very soft and nice.
    Great job.

  • Anne Lyken-Garner on Apr 18, 2008

    Take it easy Randy.

    Very soft and emotive poem Liane. Wonderful to read.

  • tracy sardelli on Apr 19, 2008

    lovely poem, heartwarming and passionate.

  • Lucy Lockett on Apr 19, 2008

    Beautiful and very well written, creates a wonderfully romantic image!

  • Speed Limit on Apr 27, 2008

    This is truly beautiful, Liane. Congratulations.

  • D.M. Parker on Apr 29, 2008

    I like the image of “alabaster fantasy … ” and the way you directly ask the reader,
    “Am I dancing in your memory?
    Do you often day dream visions filled of, only you and me?
    Can I take you in my arms?
    Can I spin you “round and “round?”

    it makes one want to say YES.

  • MysLykeMeeh on May 1, 2008

    So sweet piece.

  • salvatore on May 6, 2008

    a beautiful romantic poem. well done.

  • OhSugar on Feb 13, 2009

    Love the photo. Beautiful love poem. Nicely done.

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