Just a foolish meaningless crime.

A witness or a murderer,

someone felt the wrath,

he was either a true innocent

or a true sociopath,

he just stood there,

and confused souls filled the air

and they wondered if he even

understood that kind of fear,

he was standing in the piss stench

of a small, dark passage way,

where homeless people would stay,

it was between two downtown buildings,

which were closed for the day,

in front of him was a homeless derelict,

memories flushed,

and his head crushed,

his pants pulled below his knees,

it was a horrible fate,

he wanted nothing more

than a warm place to defecate,

a chance to catch his breath,

and got beaten to death

for that simple ambition,

a more meaningless murder

could not have been committed.

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Comments (8)
  • Sourav on Nov 10, 2010

    Great write!

  • Guy Hogan on Nov 10, 2010

    These horrific crimes seem so senseless. You capture here a senseless crime very well.

  • fishfry aka Elizabeth Figueroa on Nov 10, 2010

    Sends chills down my spine. You have created a vivid picture of one of many senseless crimes

  • LoveDoctor on Nov 10, 2010

    Good imagery to capture a meaningless crime.

  • albert1jemi on Nov 10, 2010

    great share

  • yes me on Nov 10, 2010

    Yes, its a top notch read this piece Frank… cheers

  • PSingh1990 on Nov 10, 2010

    Nice Share.

    :-)

  • Lady Sunshine on Nov 11, 2010

    Such a senseless and horrific crime. You are in your element again. lol.

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