The feelings that flood through me as I think of my baby boy. Now he has grown into such a wonderful man. Fighting for the Country that he loves and calls home. Being taken away from his family to fight for what he believes in. Proud to be an American!

Leaving you yesterday to me was so hard,

I will wait and worry until your home again Ill be on my guard.

You have grown into a wonderful son and man,

becoming a soldier with your mom your biggest fan.

Be safe on your travels across the big sea,

come home to me safely is what I want to be.

God please protect him in his journeys I pray,

Keep him close to you and out of harms way.

I love you my son and this love only grows,

you are my baby and for you here is a red rose.

The miles that are between us will not prevail,

we can keep in touch if only by snail mail.

I await for your message that things are going well,

and God has protected you in that great hell.

Being a Soldier is not a  small task,

you have excelled and cherish this mask.

The pride that I feel when I think what you’ve done,

Knowing in the end we all will have won.

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  • Priyanka R on Jan 9, 2009

    excellent. very moving

  • Glynis Smy on Jan 9, 2009

    I hope you feel my arms around you Linda, I cannot comfort you in any other way, I am sorry. Our family is thinking of your son and you all. x A beautiful, emotional piece.

  • Morgana on Jan 9, 2009

    Lindalulu, I will pray so your son comes home safely soon.

  • Geri Ohara on Jan 9, 2009

    Hi Linda hope your son stays safe

  • CutestPrincess on Jan 9, 2009

    wonderful poem for your wonderful and brave son, linda!

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Jan 9, 2009

    Mother’s love is precious. Thanks, Linda as always!I still feel alone there (you know where I mean).

  • Peter Cimino on Jan 9, 2009

    Extremely moving and well done. God bless your son for what he does and god bless you for being so supportive and loving

  • Bren Parks on Jan 9, 2009

    Oh yes! The hardest part of parenthood comes when they are grown. It is even harder to watch them go into a dangerous situation. Great work! My heart welled up into my throat.

  • Will Gray on Jan 9, 2009

    Wonderful tribute to your son! May God watch over him and keep him safe!

  • Christine Ramsay on Jan 9, 2009

    A wonderful tribute to a brave son. My heart goes out to you. It is one of the hardest things you can do to send your son into danger. may God keep him safe.

    Love Christine

  • lindalulu on Jan 9, 2009

    Thank you all so much for all of your support!

  • Chris Stonecipher on Jan 9, 2009

    My prayers are with your son! tell your son that from one veteran to another I thank you!

  • Joie Schmidt on Jan 9, 2009

    God bless you and all your loved ones kind angel*

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • nutuba on Jan 9, 2009

    This is beautifully done with so much emotion. Please thank your son for all he does.

  • Bo Russo on Jan 9, 2009

    Very moving Linda,God will watch over your boy and he will be home safe before you even know it.I tip my hat to both of you.

  • CA Johnson on Jan 9, 2009

    Your poem was very beautiful. :)

  • AC Hamilton III on Jan 9, 2009

    I can definitely relate. It wasn’t long ago I was praying like you;for my son’s care and return. He is home now, having gone where your son is now. Very moving and touching. I wrote a song for my son while he was gone. I am grateful I had the chance to sing it to him personally. I’ll be praying for your son now too.

    Blessings to you and all the troops.

    AC

  • valli on Jan 9, 2009

    An excellent and emotional piece.

  • Inna Tysoe on Jan 9, 2009

    That is truly moving.

    Inna

  • Jeoffrey Meister on Jan 9, 2009

    God bless you and your brave son Lindalulu.

  • NEELAM PANDEY on Jan 9, 2009

    very touching indeed!

  • nobert soloria bermosa on Jan 10, 2009

    nice piece and beautifully expressed,

  • Brian Daniel Stankich on Jan 10, 2009

    I prayed for him too. Brian

  • david irvine on Jan 10, 2009

    This truley does capture the love a mother has for her son. Great read.

  • papaleng on Jan 10, 2009

    Linda I can only prayers for your son that he may come home safely and be with you, a beautiful and moving write.

  • Kim Buck on Jan 10, 2009

    May your son keep us safe and may he return safely to you.

  • katarina giselle on Jan 11, 2009

    This poem really touched me. I have a baby boy..and I can feel the pride for your son. It excites me what I have to look forward to with my own son!

  • eddiego65 on Jan 15, 2009

    Touching poem. I pray for your son to return home safely.

  • FOREVER POETRY on Feb 15, 2009

    BEING THE OVERPROTECTIVE DAD THAT I AM WITH MY BOYS, I’M GLAD THAT THEIR STILL YOUNG AND AREN’T READY TO TAK ON THE WORLD THEMSELVES, BUT WHEN THEY DO. I WILL PRAY TO GOD EVERYDAY THAT HE KEEPS THEM SAFE.

  • Denise Kawaii on May 8, 2009

    Happy early mother’s day. Best wishes and prayers for you and your son.

  • Joni Keith on May 12, 2009

    Your son is brave and so are you. This really choked me up. I can feel the love you have for your son. I pray the two of you are soon reunited. Sorry I’m late at reading this but I hope you had a Happy Mother’s Day.

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