Dedicated to Kristi Herrick. A poem about the night we stayed in the Mark Hopkins hotel in San Francisco.

Through the concrete spires and cold dark roads,

The fog clung to every wall,

Over stone it slid and brushed as though it were breathing,

Behind the glass of fifteen floors,

From the warmth of our temporary sanctuary,

You bathed as I watched the glimmer of lights being suffocated by the fog,

The cathedrals orange fought to reach me,

And glowed tenaciously, accompanied by a stained glass green,

And streetcar noise so far below rose, ringing as it passed,

This city laid out in crowded confusion,

Cluttered wall to wall,

On Foundations made of gold,

Stone and brick .

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  • Joseph Gardner on Jan 30, 2011

    What the Dickens? I wrote this but didn\’t post it here. Not that I care either of course. Just surprised to see it here.

  • Joseph Gardner on Jan 30, 2011

    What the Dickens? I wrote this but didnt post it here. Not that I care either of course. Just surprised to see it here.

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