A Night by The Ocean

Darla Cooke on Sep 24, 2009

Tags: Acrostic, caress, cravings, Desire, embrace, fantasies, full moon, kissing, love, lovers, Lovers Knot, naked, ocean, poem, relationship, romance, Starry Skies, touch

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An acrostic love poem.

A night by the ocean together,

Naked in your loving embrace.

Indulging in secret fantasies,

Giving in to total surrender.

Hungrily kissing with wild passion,

Tasting your intoxicating nectar.

Bodies aflame with raging desire,

Yielding to our urgent cravings.

Tempted by your delicate caress,

Holding my body close and tight,

Enticed by your sensual touch.

Outside a full moon is shining,

Clear and starry skies above.

Entangled in a lovers knot,

Aching to feel you inside me,

Needing complete satisfaction.

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Comments (20)

Brenda Nelson on Sep 24, 2009
oh I have not been by the ocean for years, I miss the smells and the passion of it.
Sourav on Sep 24, 2009
It’s a lovely poem… wonderfully written!
Nikita K on Sep 24, 2009
A passion filled, beautiful and tantalising poem. You write words laden with wonder Darla
Roberta on Sep 24, 2009
Wow, this boils with sensual words. Well done.
cardy on Sep 24, 2009
Lovely lovely poem, you have done it again loved it!
Christine Ramsay on Sep 24, 2009
A very romantic and passionate piece. Beautiful work.

Christine
STEVE666 on Sep 24, 2009
Hot ‘n’ spicy, Darla. Like it!
Roberto Sardelli 1 on Sep 24, 2009
Beautiful. one can sense the passion. very well written Darla
cutedrishti8 on Sep 24, 2009
What a presentation Madam..Great
Tanya Wallace on Sep 24, 2009
Fabulous sensual poem filled with desire and yearning! My fav by you!Excellent write!
Yvonne K on Sep 24, 2009
nice
Yovita Siswati on Sep 24, 2009
beautiful and passionate!
Linda Lori on Sep 24, 2009
Full of passion!!
ken bultman on Sep 24, 2009
Wonderful. Lengthy acrostic.
Ramalingam on Sep 24, 2009
a nice romantic piece.Thanks.
T.Rex McGoogle on Sep 24, 2009
Very well written. I am moved by your passionate writing.
Strong sensual imagination you possess if I may say that respectfully.
mystery61 on Sep 25, 2009
Very well written, I haven’t been to the ocean in years. Good job!
Papa Sparks on Sep 25, 2009
Nicely done. I like writing acrostic poems, too. They are neat to write, aren’t they?
Melody SJAL on Sep 25, 2009
That was extremely passionate.
CutestPrincess on Oct 18, 2009
very passionate poem…. love it as always!

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