This A Poem when I Wrote When I Was A Small kid!

Pen Pen Pen,

The last number is ten,

You and me, we both are men,

This is what i think every now and then,

Does it make any sense?

Den Den Den,

I just read about John glen,

he made the first rocket flight, but when?

i try to remember again and again,

but cant, so had a look at madeleine,

Does it make any sense?

Fen fen fen,

I went to see the movie Batmen,

I found it very giant,

He was riding like a horseman,

and always stays in a basement,

Does it make any sense?

So hen hen hen,

i once thought to be a comedienne,

i told my parents then,

and they told me to be a wise men,

I thought over and over again,

Then i wish to go to Switzerland,

Does it make any sense?

One day i went to date with Caroline,

She and me, we talk beside iceman,

I told her how will you get pregnant,

She never ever saw me then,

I guess it now made sense!

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Comments (29)
  • holdkunal on Sep 14, 2011

    nice poem. A nonsense full of sense..

  • freebird989 on Sep 14, 2011

    Thanks Kunal!

  • ittech on Sep 14, 2011

    like it thanks for this

  • freebird989 on Sep 14, 2011

    My pleasure ittenchil!

  • okkhattak on Sep 14, 2011

    like it.thank you

  • freebird989 on Sep 14, 2011

    Thanks ‘okkhattak’

  • jyotimanasi on Sep 14, 2011

    hilarious

  • freebird989 on Sep 14, 2011

    Thanks jyoti.

  • Aroosa Gloomy on Sep 14, 2011

    Really nonsense and numb,especially dumb.LOLZZZZZZZZZDon’t mind amigo.

  • freebird989 on Sep 14, 2011

    no problemo Aroosagloomy! Thanks for the comment!

  • Socorro Lawas on Sep 14, 2011

    I like your rhymes, I can hear bells.

  • freebird989 on Sep 14, 2011

    hehe..Thanks Socorro!

  • beingwell on Sep 14, 2011

    Very nice! This is no nonsense! :D

  • Jay Banzon on Sep 15, 2011

    i like this one :-)

  • freebird989 on Sep 15, 2011

    Thanks Jay Banzon and beingwell for sharing your comments!

  • Elle64 on Sep 15, 2011

    Good nonsens

  • freebird989 on Sep 15, 2011

    Thanks Elle64!

  • vardhanh71 on Sep 15, 2011

    liked this one….

  • freebird989 on Sep 15, 2011

    Thanks ‘vardhanh71′

  • Atanacio on Sep 15, 2011

    actually I enjoyed reading this nonsense of a poem great share :)

  • Saurav Banerjee on Sep 15, 2011

    Well written my friend. You won’t believe but it just helped me to release my stress after a day’s hectic work.

  • Ruby Hawk on Sep 15, 2011

    That’s cute, You were a talented little boy.I hope you received lots of compliments.

  • freebird989 on Sep 15, 2011

    Thanks Atancaio, Saurrav and Ruby for sharing your comments and appreciating this little poem!

  • caribbean369 on Sep 19, 2011

    I really LOVE poems like this! This was a REAL joy to read and one of my favorites from you! Wonderful job! :)

  • freebird989 on Sep 19, 2011

    Thanks caribbean369!

  • marqjonz on Sep 21, 2011

    Excellent. This poem is as much fun as Dr. Seuss.

  • freebird989 on Sep 23, 2011

    Thanks ‘marqjonz’!

  • Kristie Claar on Oct 5, 2011

    Quite unique, great work.

  • freebird989 on Nov 2, 2011

    Thanks krisite!

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