A Pair of Haiku

Lady Sunshine on Oct 3, 2011

Tags: awakening, Black Cat, cat, Haiku, icicles, kiss, snowflakes, Spring, sun

Haiku is the appreciation of the little things, delighting in the small moments that occur. Words that pithily paint a picture, capturing a moment in time. These are my pitiful attempts of a misused and most misunderstood form of poetry.

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Frozen icicles,

Dripping wet from the sun’s kiss -

Awakening spring.

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A black cat lies still -

Suddenly, he pounces quick,

Upon the snowflakes.

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Shirley Shuler on Oct 3, 2011
Hi Lady Sunshine, there’s nothing pitiful about these beautiful haiku’s, they are written so beautifully, how could there be.
Margaret Boseroy on Oct 4, 2011
Very cute. I like them.
Christine Ramsay on Oct 4, 2011
Not pitiful at all. These haikus are beautiful.
Ruby Hawk on Oct 4, 2011
those are sweet.
papaleng on Oct 5, 2011
Perfect Haikus,
krrymarie on Oct 5, 2011
I really like Haikus took me a while to learn how to do them and still get them wrong at times. they are enjoyable to write too.
These are really cute