A never ending path with no destination…

I stand at the beginning of a long uneven winding path dark mensing trees line it’s skinny borders as far as my eyes can see.

There branches intertwine in a locked kiss creating a moonlight pricked tunnel before me I can still see the brightly shining moon in the thick velvet black sky until I enter the paths domain only a half glow remains.

Forward my feet take me my eyes are opened wide as the trees encase me on either side the air is still no sound is heard not even a hooting bird.

my body pushes me onward one foot in front of the other no need to look around straight a head I must be bound.

the near darkness covers me in a blanket as I quicken my crunching footsteps a deafening sound as they pound the ground.

A never ending track with no way back never changing it’s view as I trudge on as if a demonic treadmill has stolen my will over and over the same scene not even knowing were I have been.

This had a beginning so where is the end…………………. 

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  • Angela Ohm on Oct 25, 2010

    Wonderful writing ! You are very talented ! Thank you for sharing your gift :)

  • Aiyanna on Oct 25, 2010

    A Well written piece… :-)

  • albert1jemi on Oct 25, 2010

    great share

  • Sunjhini on Oct 25, 2010

    lovely imagery and beautifully worded.

  • lapasan on Oct 25, 2010

    Good poem Cardy!

  • dino renaldo on Oct 26, 2010

    good share

  • Anj M on Oct 26, 2010

    Nice

  • ishinimrod on Oct 26, 2010

    well written one… My pleasure to comment to this :)

  • hallofwords on Nov 4, 2010

    nicely written and beautiful imagery

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