A Perfect Dream of You

Liane Schmidt on Nov 16, 2009

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A divine promise of two.

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Passing through space and time
Voyaging through
The intriguing tunnels
In your mind

It’s extraordinary
Nothing short of
Profound
The miracles and turns
Longing to be found

Another chapter
Another page turned
Each line precise
Each verse a mental image
A new lesson learned

Take my hand
I need you to take the lead
I need you to help me
Feel perfectly free

I close my eyes and trust in you
I take one more step
Closer to the divine promise
The perfect dream
Of two

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Goodselfme on Nov 16, 2009
Beautifully penned prose, my friend.TX
Francy on Nov 16, 2009
This is just wonderful.
Keep it up.
Guy Hogan on Nov 16, 2009
Yes, when you do find the right other one it can be beautiful.
Themax on Nov 16, 2009
beautiful just beautiful,Thanks for sharing
TroostAvenue on Nov 16, 2009
Very nice. Thank you.
Merciful on Nov 16, 2009
Lovely, quite inspiring. I like it.
Will Gray on Nov 16, 2009
So beautiful! What a talent you are!
Linda Lori on Nov 16, 2009
So beautiful, Liane! =)
Teves on Nov 16, 2009
Very interesting…
Papa Sparks on Nov 16, 2009
Very lovely and evocative, Liane. I like the words that you chose and the way this one flows/reads.
CA Johnson on Nov 16, 2009
This is a perfect love poem, Liane. It is a great read.
CHAN LEE PENG on Nov 16, 2009
Unique and sweet poem. Thanks!
Eunice Tan on Nov 16, 2009
Perfectly beautiful
papaleng on Nov 17, 2009
Let the heart speaks.. this is so beautiful Liane.
Louie Jerome on Nov 17, 2009
Lovely read.
drelayaraja on Nov 17, 2009
well done.
STEVE666 on Nov 17, 2009
Enjoyed this! Good write, Liane.
Doaa Abdelfattah on Nov 18, 2009
“I close my eyes and trust in you”

It feels so good to do that.

very nice.

Doaa
T.Rex McGoogle on Nov 18, 2009
Liane, your poetry is very interesting and not difficult to
interpret. My favorite kind.
Pithom on Nov 19, 2009
Not only a perfect dream, but a perfect write too. Triond is helping me to satisfy my thirst for great poetry. Thanks for the quenching.
Poetic Enigma on Nov 21, 2009
Absolutely lovely piece, so beautifully composed.
Thank you for sharing (:
Trinitaria on Nov 21, 2009
Beautiful!
clay hurtubise on Nov 22, 2009
Well done!
Thanks,
Clay
LOVELY HONEY on Nov 22, 2009
ur a poet i am just a pupil of ur eye
gr8
abhishek40914 on Nov 23, 2009
beautiful
T. S. GARP on Nov 28, 2009
I like this a lot. Great poem, Liane!
live and lovin life on Nov 28, 2009
i like this poem it’s so cute…..
CutestPrincess on Dec 7, 2009
That’s pretty creative piece.
Greg Seltz on Dec 7, 2009
I like it!
diamondpoet on Dec 11, 2009
Excellent work, well created piece, I enjoyed.

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