A Perfect Place

Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Nov 12, 2010

Tags: 5, bible, God's will, joy, new world, paradise, perfection, promise, Revelation 21: 4

Revelation 21: 4, five.

There is most certainly a better world

There must be

A world where there will never exist

The sort of wickedness that leaves mankind

Remorseful, worse for wear, and remiss

As we spin about on this indigo pearl

There will most assuredly one day be

A perfect place

Peaceful, pristine, where every wish

For a world of wondrous purpose and combined

Will be given to man and woman as a gift

For the fatherless child, both boy and girl

Some may ask how really can I be so sure?

That part is easy

Because God has told me and promises this

That if we seek earnestly, then we shall happily find

There will be no need for a bucket or a list

Just wide open arms to grab hold as the blessings unfurl

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LoveDoctor on Nov 12, 2010
A very beautiful share. Your writing style is very good.
Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Nov 12, 2010
Thanks L.D.
Jimmy Shilaho on Nov 12, 2010
Jerry, with all due respect, if we don’t make this world better, there won’t be a second chance.
LOVELYHONEY on Nov 12, 2010
INDEED BEAUTY LIES
IN THE EYES
OF THE BEHOLDER
undoubtedly urs
and mine
equally
pattiann on Nov 12, 2010
Very good. It’s nice to see the two poems you wrote on here today.
Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Nov 12, 2010
Leo, I don’t subscribe to sitting on one’s hands. However I do believe that we would be doomed without God who will very soon intervene on our behalf.

To put faith in man to fix the world’s ills is fool hardy.

If you have a bible read Jeremiah 10:23. We have had thousands of years to get it right and yet here we are still screwing the pooch.
Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Nov 12, 2010
Lovely Honey and PattiAnn, thank you.
Ruby Hawk on Nov 12, 2010
beautiful thoughts,
sloanie on Nov 12, 2010
A bucket list, now there’s a thought!
LCM Linda on Nov 13, 2010
Believe in God, that’s all we need. Great share.
Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Nov 13, 2010
Thank you Ruby, Sloanie and Linda for taking the time to comment. I appreciate it.
PSingh1990 on Nov 13, 2010
Nice Share.
Kaye TM on Nov 13, 2010
very inspirational piece
LadyElena on Nov 14, 2010
A Big \”Amen\” to that.
Happy Sunday…
Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Nov 14, 2010
Thanks everyone for your kind words.
Adrn0919 on Nov 14, 2010
Rev 21:3-5 a world without tears and pain, Look I am making all things new, write cause these words are faithful and true. I believe these words as well. thank you for such a beautiful poem.
Aiyanna on Nov 15, 2010
The perfect world with no pain is what I long for in this world and next… The world with utmost joy and happiness with a promise of a brighter tomorrow…

With the Creator by our side, we will always be able to follow the mission and change the world, by infusing thoughts that would help create a difference in the lives of others…

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