A Perfect Spring Day

Darla Cooke on Mar 18, 2010

Tags: blue sky, Clear Sky, Haiku, Spring, Sunny day, Sunshine

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Haiku poem about a sunny Spring day.

Clear blue sky above

Sunshine is warming the land

A perfect Spring day

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Comments (15)

tatikos on Mar 18, 2010
he nice one and includes all the spring characteristics even when its short
cardy on Mar 18, 2010
Like this it is perfect nice work.
Christine Ramsay on Mar 18, 2010
Today we have a perfect spring day outside. This haiku describes it beautifully.

Christine
Starpisces on Mar 18, 2010
short and sweet!
ken bultman on Mar 18, 2010
A perfect haiku to match.
maranatha on Mar 18, 2010
Yes, you can feel it. Nice work.
diamondpoet on Mar 18, 2010
That was short and sweet and well said.
giftarist on Mar 18, 2010
Very nice haiku.
petercurtis97 on Mar 18, 2010
This type of poem so quick ad direct
Temjen Imchen on Mar 19, 2010
Beautiful and well written
Precious Illusions on Mar 19, 2010
the epitome of beauty
STEVE666 on Mar 19, 2010
Nice haiku, Darla.
Here’s another.

I love to lay here
In the sunshine of your love
Melting in your arms
CA Johnson on Mar 19, 2010
Great haiku about spring. The weather is certainly better here in New Jersey than it has been in a bit.
deep blue on Mar 21, 2010
Well expressed.
pattiann on Mar 26, 2010
I love haiku! Thanks for writing it and make my day. Spring also gives me hope for warm weather as the flurries are predicted for today!

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