A Perfect Summer’s Day

Liane Schmidt on Jun 14, 2008

Tags: animal, Cupid, Day, Dreams, embrace, golden retriever, jasmine tea, kite, love, loyal, ocean, ocean spray, orange, palm trees, perfect, poem, poet, Poetry, romance, romantic, sand, summer, vanilla

Palm trees and ocean spray.

Palm trees and ocean spray
A cool breeze
A summer’s day
Jasmine mint tea
A kite flying open and free
Spices and warm cocoa at night
Wrapped up in your arms feels so right
A loyal golden retriever
The moment cupid’s arrow first touched her
Days filled with hide and seek
Waiting anxiously to see him after an entire week
Smiles and daffodils
Rolling down those lush green hills
Swing sets and monkey bars
Driving in your perfect dream car
Top down along a coast with a perfect view
The first moment with her, when you finally knew
Candlelit dinners and dancing shoes
A relaxing breakfast perusing the morning news
Vacationing in an exotic land
Ten toes covered in rich golden sand
Vanilla candles and coconut treats
Breakfast in bed lounging in silken crème sheets
Bright orange with a side of your favorite dessert
Lounging around in your comfiest t-shirt
Blue jeans and sandals too
The day you woke up and all your dreams finally took to air and flew!

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salvatore on Jun 14, 2008
I really love Liane, excellent job well done

Take Care

Salvatore
hear odrocab on Jun 14, 2008
All i could say is admire your work. Very nice
nobert soloria bermosa on Jun 14, 2008
another excellent piece,thanks Liane
Ruby Hawk on Jun 14, 2008
Your description fits my idea of a perfect summer day.
IcyCucky on Jun 14, 2008
Beautiful, and full of images of a summer’s day!
Josey on Jun 14, 2008
Sounds lovely. Nicely written!
diane mccloskey on Jun 14, 2008
you covered it all! nice imagery!
mohd14987 on Jun 15, 2008
very well written…
TP Sage on Jun 15, 2008
Beautiful images. Left me with a warm, happy feeling.
Anne Lyken-Garner on Jun 15, 2008
This left me longing for a nice hot holiday. Great job.
Lucy Lockett on Jun 15, 2008
Very vivid, strong senses and very appealing. Left me feeling a little sad, longing for those awesome days to return again. Nice work.
MindIt on Jun 16, 2008
Evoked many beutiful imgaes in my mind…excellent!
Crystal Tankersley on Jun 17, 2008
Very good write. Your imagery is loud and clear and makes me long for those perfect summer days when timelines and deadlines didnt matter, stress was something that happened to other people and the most important issue of the day was living it for all it was worth. Thanks for taking me back and reminding me that to be able to maintain balance in our stress filled days of timelines and deadlines we have to, just every once in a while, set out to have one of those perfect summer days. Peace and Love, Crystal
Francie on Jun 18, 2008
What a dreamy read =)
Judy Sheldon on Jun 30, 2008
What a beautiful summer day. It makes one long for more.
donnaalene3 on Aug 15, 2008
very good and so true been to a few of these places myself
mdegenhardt on Oct 6, 2008
You successfully described my perfect day as well. This is lovely, both visually and verbally. Michael

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