http://authspot.com/poetry/a-piece-of-heaven-vocabulary-poem/ Fri, 17 Feb 2012 11:27:47 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 http://authspot.com/poetry/a-piece-of-heaven-vocabulary-poem/comment-page-1/#comment-1071729 Kara Mae Adamo Tue, 22 Dec 2009 00:28:49 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/a-piece-of-heaven-vocabulary-poem/#comment-1071729 I like it--check how you word the definitions...if you don't mind a little suggestion, just reword some things so that they beat rhythmically together--it will create more flow throughout the poem. Very cool idea, though =) I like it–check how you word the definitions…if you don’t mind a little suggestion, just reword some things so that they beat rhythmically together–it will create more flow throughout the poem. Very cool idea, though =)

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