A stream of consciousness about writing, art, poetry or what you will.

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Is this a poem?

Is it a bird?

Don’t be clever.

A dialogue?

Well I suppose there are two voices.

But no characters as such.

 

No need. We just alternate.

We? Am I bipolar then?

No, but you love talking to yourself.

Who else is there to talk to?

Yeh I guess the punters will have gone by now.

They say those surfers have very short attention spans.

Some might have stayed.

 

So is this a poem?

That’s My line!

What does it matter?

Well, anyway, it’s written line by line. Various lengths. Beginning with capitals.

Not verse by verse?

If you like. I prefer lines though.

In stanzas?

Yeh, of sorts.

 

So you could post it somewhere as a poem then?

Some places only take “poems”, but they accept  stories.

So long as they are Called poems?

Yes.

I’ve always called mine “pieces” haven’t I?

That’s right.

 

Why?

Because it would be pretentious to call them poems.

But what if I get poetic?

Fine. Enjoy.

 

But is this Art?

Maybe.

Why?

Because hopefully I’m making the reader think.

What about?

About what constitutes literature, poetry, prose, verse…

With this “stream of consciousness”?

Well, stream of Something, ah ah.

 

MMM, well, some scripts (Arabic and Hebrew) are written right to left.

This like?

Line this after stop better but yes.

Okay.

You just have to get out of the box now and then, like that guy Cummings.

So what’s the bottom line?

That writing is most therapeutic and worthwhile.

Is that all?

Just about sums it up.

Write

‘Til you reach

The bottom line.

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  • KimTherapist on Jan 4, 2011

    Paul, have you been drinking again?

  • Bruce Officer on Jan 4, 2011

    But how do you know when you’ve reached the bottom line? Maybe when you’ve run off the page!

  • PaulB on Jan 4, 2011

    Or fallen out of my chair lol!

    Actually I haven’t since lunchtime Kim – maybe that’s the thing!

  • Thespeakman on Jan 4, 2011

    Not a huge fan of poetry – but I really enjoyed that, thank you

  • PaulB on Jan 4, 2011

    the speakman, did you mean “AND” rather than “but” ? lol

  • Val Mills on Jan 4, 2011

    Loved reading this, smiled all the way through. Great.

  • PaulB on Jan 4, 2011

    Thanks Val – and the others.
    Kim it’s midnight here now (6PM where you are?) so I’ll check in again tomorrow. Goodnight all.

  • ashan1614 on Jan 4, 2011

    I’ve never thought of writing down the conversations I have with myself inside my head. I really enjoyed this!

  • bigpapadan on Jan 4, 2011

    Paul, when this finds you in the a.m. your time, just know that I went to bed chuckling my self silly. This is awesome.

  • Mr Arrogant on Jan 4, 2011

    Great share :)

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Jan 5, 2011

    I like your style.

  • PSingh1990 on Jan 5, 2011

    Nice Share.

    :-)

  • PaulB on Jan 5, 2011

    Thanks everyone. It maybe takes a peculiar type of madness to think of typing out your inner conversations. Yet it\’s dead easy to do. At first I was going to type a monologue (as usual) but arguing with yourself as you go along can be fun. Thanks again.

  • PaulB on Jan 5, 2011

    Dang I forgot – this thing hates apostrophes etc. – see above anyway.

  • LewSethics on Jan 5, 2011

    Tarantula weaves his tangled
    web and draws
    us to our
    demise
    with
    poetry
    that flows
    successfully from
    twisted mind to gnarled fingertips.

  • PaulB on Jan 5, 2011

    Utter crap! Only joking. (See The Forum). You picture me very well Lews. Nice one.

  • LewSethics on Jan 5, 2011

    I don\’t have to go to the forum, I went there when I first came to Triond and was appalled at the abuse certain people there were handing out. I guess I was fortunate, DD told me my stuff was good although he didn’t particularly care for it. I gathered from reading around the forum that crap is the word he uses for almost everything he reads, so I consider myself lucky, I guess. Some other \”writers\” at the forum are more hateful and less qualified than DD, whom I always picture as kind of a Malcolm in the Middle on crack kind of kid.

  • PaulB on Jan 5, 2011

    Thanks Lews. You understand me well I see. I will keep a diplomatic silence re the forum I think. And just enjoy my writing.

  • Yovita Siswati on Jan 6, 2011

    interesting poem

  • PaulB on Jan 6, 2011

    Ah yes. The Piece. Thanks.

  • cafftee on Jan 7, 2011

    My poems are always ‘pieces’ of stuff that fall out of my brain and sometimes fit together on the page. Anyway, I like this a lot.

  • PaulB on Jan 7, 2011

    Thanks Cafftee.

  • Ubel Ein on Jan 26, 2011

    I think this is really good! It is unpredictable and truly enjoyable to read, Skryboss. As a matter of fact, I’m going to read it again…

  • Ubel Ein on Jan 26, 2011

    After reading it a second time, I couldn’t help but notice how genuine and unique this is… Splendid.

  • PaulB on Jan 26, 2011

    Cheers Ubel. Yes I love off-the-cuff-stuff. Oddly you showed up as 2 comments but 0 views! Odd this place sometimes. Yet glad you liked.

  • rubielee on Jan 28, 2011

    i like every article you wrote wish i can learn something from you…

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