Comments on: A Poem About Love http://authspot.com/poetry/a-poem-about-love/ Sun, 22 Nov 2009 06:05:08 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 By: dewfunk http://authspot.com/poetry/a-poem-about-love/comment-page-1/#comment-842079 dewfunk Wed, 08 Jul 2009 17:22:28 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/a-poem-about-love/#comment-842079 Wooo that's such a long poem friend, it's good though just amazed that you could wrote a poem that long ..keep it up.. Wooo that’s such a long poem friend, it’s good though just amazed that you could wrote a poem that long ..keep it up..

]]> By: Sidney http://authspot.com/poetry/a-poem-about-love/comment-page-1/#comment-842077 Sidney Fri, 03 Jul 2009 23:03:00 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/a-poem-about-love/#comment-842077 I liked it C: I liked it C:

]]> By: BradONeill http://authspot.com/poetry/a-poem-about-love/comment-page-1/#comment-842075 BradONeill Fri, 03 Jul 2009 08:10:47 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/a-poem-about-love/#comment-842075 That is a good pretty good poem. I enjoyed it. I thought it was a bit long with a few forced areas <br /> <br /> I’ve never felt like this before<br /> <br /> It feels like I’m in a war<br /> <br /> A war against myself and you<br /> <br /> That I kept on ignoring to try myself from going blue<br /> <br /> and some minor errors.<br /> I (*being*) to think, the very air I breath fails me.<br /> I (*state*) at her cold, empty as if she were my mirror.<br /> <br /> But a very good effort heart felt and true what more can you ask of a first time poet! Keep it up my friend. That is a good pretty good poem. I enjoyed it. I thought it was a bit long with a few forced areas

I’ve never felt like this before

It feels like I’m in a war

A war against myself and you

That I kept on ignoring to try myself from going blue

and some minor errors.
I (*being*) to think, the very air I breath fails me.
I (*state*) at her cold, empty as if she were my mirror.

But a very good effort heart felt and true what more can you ask of a first time poet! Keep it up my friend.

]]> By: HelloSiti http://authspot.com/poetry/a-poem-about-love/comment-page-1/#comment-842073 HelloSiti Fri, 03 Jul 2009 01:29:55 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/a-poem-about-love/#comment-842073 Islamic poem of what? Islamic poem of what?

]]> By: Morgana http://authspot.com/poetry/a-poem-about-love/comment-page-1/#comment-842071 Morgana Thu, 02 Jul 2009 21:42:44 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/a-poem-about-love/#comment-842071 I also ask myself that question all the time. Sounds like a song, I like it. I also ask myself that question all the time. Sounds like a song, I like it.

]]> By: gringoperry http://authspot.com/poetry/a-poem-about-love/comment-page-1/#comment-842069 gringoperry Thu, 02 Jul 2009 21:39:01 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/a-poem-about-love/#comment-842069 Quite a few spelling errors, but is English your first language? Other than that it had quite good flow for a first attempt at poetry. Very good, keep writing and if you want to read any of my poetry, please feel free to do so and leave comments. Quite a few spelling errors, but is English your first language? Other than that it had quite good flow for a first attempt at poetry. Very good, keep writing and if you want to read any of my poetry, please feel free to do so and leave comments.

]]> By: Francy http://authspot.com/poetry/a-poem-about-love/comment-page-1/#comment-842067 Francy Thu, 02 Jul 2009 03:58:00 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/a-poem-about-love/#comment-842067 very interesting.<br /> Keep sharing. very interesting.
Keep sharing.

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