He’s my pillar of strength.

A strong wind may blow

A lightning may strike

A thunder may roar

But a bamboo just sway

Problems may come and go

Good news may always be slow

But just like a bamboo

You can sway but still standing so.

This is dedicated to my father who is celebrating his 55th birthday on December 10, 2010. I love you ‘Pa.

Your loving daughter,

Ate :)

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  • The Soul Explorer on Dec 9, 2010

    Lovely poem!

  • tazlene on Jan 19, 2011

    oh thanks for reading! :)

  • xiaowei on Jan 23, 2011

    great poem!

  • sina12 on Jun 7, 2011

    wow! great poem!

  • tazlene on Jun 8, 2011

    @xiaowei, thanks!

  • tazlene on Jun 8, 2011

    @sina12 hello! thanks for reading.

  • luna on Jun 9, 2011

    i wish i know how to write a poem. but its great.

  • tazlene on Jun 10, 2011

    practice makes perfect. i started writing poems at the age of 10. :)

  • iskalar on Jul 6, 2011

    nice poem!

  • tazlene on Jul 13, 2011

    @iskalar thanks!

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