A poem to pass the bad times while I think about the good ones.

sequins in sequence

across the shoulder

of your dress

drive a madness sewn

deep beneath

soil of muddied desires

a loam of loss

lunges forth at last

grapples with the words

“i love you”

as we watch them dry

frozen

in time-soaked

cement

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  • raman13 on Sep 12, 2009

    excellent

  • Lauren Axelrod on Sep 12, 2009

    Sincere and beautiful.

  • Lostash on Sep 13, 2009

    Another great poem, Kris. Sounds like a Prom Night declaration.

  • willie wondka on Sep 21, 2009

    short and simple poem,nice.

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