A Poem of Insignificance

Sourav on Nov 18, 2009

Tags: hatred, Life, Poem of insigificance, Poetry, religion, world

Poetry By Sourav RC.

Sky is crying for the earth
We make our hellish path
This world’s dying day by day
Green has now turned to gray

Flowing blood of yours ‘n’ mine
Yet happiness in a glass of wine
This world’s dying day by day
Notorious violence is here to stay.

Pretty houses smart streets
Crucifying her every gift
This world’s dying day by day
Future is laying in total astray.

Holy war makes holy bomb
Religion loses all aplomb
This world’s dying day by day
Blood soaked steeple- let’s pray!

Preserved hatred in the heart
Live with vengeful thrust
This world’s dying day by day
Act as a blind to find your way–

Smoke rises like my guilt
Balance is now started to tilt
And the world is dying day by day
This flimsy message I had to convey.

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Rinks Desai on Nov 18, 2009
NicePoem…….
Lord Banks on Nov 18, 2009
A very deep poem i like it.
Gudu on Nov 18, 2009
nice poem
lillyrose on Nov 18, 2009
very emotional and well presented poem.
Atanacio on Nov 18, 2009
A Powerful poem gets off to a brisk start then it fills with boldness discretion with much considerable originality I really loved this piece!
Christine Ramsay on Nov 18, 2009
You conveyed the message very well. Good work.

Christine
K.Reshma on Nov 18, 2009
Very nice poem
Hansika on Nov 18, 2009
great poem….thanks for the share
diamondpoet on Nov 18, 2009
Great write, but every word is sadly true. Thanks for sharing.
cutedrishti8 on Nov 18, 2009
Great piece of work.
novelist on Nov 18, 2009
Your poem reflects the truth. The world is surely dying every day. Well-composed and well-expressed!
ashan1614 on Nov 18, 2009
I don’t think the message is flimsy at all. The world is in a state of chaos and madness. This is an eye-opening piece and very well presented.
Brenda Nelson on Nov 18, 2009
The world isnt dying… we are killing it.
chitragopi on Nov 18, 2009
Yes, all of us act blind to many things. Your poem is quite significant.
Themax on Nov 18, 2009
Hi sourav today I am so happy to see a beautiful poem written through your hand,Very thought provoking mate and you are a beautiful poet also.Thanks for sharing!
Lady Sunshine on Nov 18, 2009
We are killing this planet.
Grace Kathryn on Nov 18, 2009
Your message is not flimsy. Well done as always. If we fill our children with love, they will have no room for hate. We are gaining some ground little by little.
Sue Nuckles on Nov 18, 2009
A very good poem.
Tanya Wallace on Nov 18, 2009
Loved it!Very thought provoking poem that is far from insignificant!!
Goodselfme on Nov 18, 2009
well penned with almost an angry tone well deserved of the contents.
sweetie1 on Nov 19, 2009
Nice poem.. very well written.
Frances Lawrence on Nov 19, 2009
A powerful and beautifully written message.
Kitty Starwizard on Nov 25, 2009
Sad but so true, my friend Kitty

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