This is a poem on India. I made it up myself when I was 8.

Please don’t criticise me for this poem. I made it when I was very young. Hope you like it!

India

India has many landforms, plains and mountains,

Inside are cities with theme parks and fountains.

Indian people are great,

To help people they were never late.

From India came good athletes,

All of them nice and supple.

Whether East or West,

Our India is the best!

This is quote is in our country’s national language.

“Bharath Matha Ki Jai!”

Thank you for reading.

I know it is funny, but I was like 8 or 9 when I wrote it. Please comment to tell if you like it or not. And if you have any more verses, please tell me.

Once again, thank you!

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  • Sourav on Sep 29, 2009

    Hello… liked and enjoyed your poem on India! Lovely! It\\\\\\\’s a good write!

  • Rump on Sep 30, 2009

    Thanks. Surprised that you like my ancient poem.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Oct 1, 2009

    you are a LOVELY INDIAN friend

    r u an INDIAN

    if so where from

    i may help u buy a p3

    if u still need it

    how young are u now

    do let me know friend

    ur poem is not ancient

    its CONTEMPORARY

    True love flows from top to toe

    Who loves who?

    No one knows

    But love of parents

    One cannot forget

    How much they slap

    Yet only parents caress

    So what your folks

    Have taught you

    Shall stand in good stead

    Your poem this one

    Will be well read

  • Rump on Oct 2, 2009

    Yes, I am an Indian.

  • Yalonda on Oct 10, 2009

    I think it’s cute! Pretty well done for an 8 year old!

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