Table tops or the tops of anything around, a convenient spot to dump the odds and ends.

How indulging is a table top

for a thorough mess

embracing all your dumps therein

and lighten your distress.

It is such a high land

kids climbing up and down

while adults go up the wall instead 

face contorted in a frown.

I open my cabinets to find

they’re all scooped clear

the contents reside on table tops

merrily through the year.

The litter go a rioting

vying for space

what a blatant display oh!

my innovation for disgrace.

Nosey guests turn up, unannounced

I mumble an excuse

I was just clearing off

they’re unconvinced, I muse.

Then, who did it and when

begins the blame game

I’m just away from calling the cops

for warring heads to tame.

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Comments (21)
  • Starpisces on Dec 9, 2011

    another nice poem here, Wonder.

  • okkhattak on Dec 9, 2011

    nice poem

  • lovinglyoursjuny on Dec 9, 2011

    Nice poem :)

  • fragile18 on Dec 9, 2011

    nice poem

  • megamatt09 on Dec 9, 2011

    A great bit of poetry.

  • Val Mills on Dec 9, 2011

    While not as bad as I used to be, I can relate to this :-)

  • gaby7 on Dec 9, 2011

    Loved this! Thanks wonder!

  • SharifaMcFarlane on Dec 9, 2011

    Lol, I think we’ve all been through it.

  • erwinkennythomas on Dec 9, 2011

    thoughtful

  • Ruby Hawk on Dec 9, 2011

    So true, I have this very morning replaced all sorts of things back into cabinets.

  • MJRapp on Dec 10, 2011

    Very nice, and I somehow feel like you’ve seen my tabletops . . .

  • gaby7 on Dec 10, 2011

    My tabletop this afternoon was a real mess and nobody was willing to take responsibility! If tables had the power of insurgence, we would probably be sleeping out of our houses! LOL!

  • J M Lennox on Dec 11, 2011

    A very common situation – very well expressed. :-)

  • Yvhes P. on Dec 11, 2011

    Very nice poem Kudos to you =)

  • FX777222999 on Dec 11, 2011

    Well written piece with a common insights.

  • Martin Kloess on Dec 11, 2011

    Very good.

  • ittech on Dec 11, 2011

    nestlings ascent up and down

    while grownups start up the fence in as an alternative

    face in a pull a face. raw my piece of furnitures to find

    theyre all scooped clear

    the mental object people on board tops

    merrily the time period. straw pass a rioting

    vying for space

    what a conspicuous revealing oh!

  • ittech on Dec 12, 2011

    It is specified a richly land

    kids up and down

    while beasts blend up the bulwark rather

    face crooked in a grimace. honorable my s to find

    theyre all scooped clear

    the aggregation lodge in on tableland tops

    merrily direct the class. bedding go on a

  • ittech on Dec 14, 2011

    for warring heads to tame

  • ittech on Dec 17, 2011

    Thanks for the very informative article

    Very good sharing. I like it.

  • PHILLY DREAMER on Dec 30, 2011

    It’s funny how cluttered a place can be when everyone just empties their pockets and walk away.

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