A Prayer for a Share of Pain

chitragopi on Oct 13, 2009

Tags: live, love, malady, mother, pain, teach

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O God, give me the strength to bear my mother’s pain!

You taught me to be,

You taught me to see;

You taught me to love,

You taught me to live.

Yet,

You did omit a bit

Did’t teach me to share,

Vile malady, pain you bear

Mother,

This truly isn’t fair.

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Comments (8)

martie on Oct 13, 2009
Very heartfelt.
wonder on Oct 13, 2009
A very deep piece of thought. Very well composed.Emotional.
Sourav on Oct 13, 2009
Very emotional write!
ken bultman on Oct 13, 2009
I don’t get it. You mad at your mom and you’re telling me about it?
willie wondka on Oct 13, 2009
i agree with ken complain to her, show her your poem lol!
Guy Hogan on Oct 13, 2009
I don’t know what to take from this poem. I don’t know what it’s saying.
Mythili Kannan on Oct 14, 2009
Nice piece
Vikram Chhabra on Oct 19, 2009
Quite an introspective piece!!

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