This I swear to you.

I promise you
All my love
Just for you
I promise you
I will never
Make you cry
I promise you
I will never
Let you down
I promise you
I will never
Ever say goodbye
I promise you
I will never
Make you blue
I promise you
I will never
Ever desert you
And I swear
I will live
And will die
Because of you.

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  • tracy sardelli on Apr 3, 2008

    sweet poem,

  • Cristene on Apr 3, 2008

    I promise you i will be here to support u..hehehehe.. promise tlg yan!

  • mitch on Apr 4, 2008

    better not 2 vow,than 2 make a vow & not fulfill it…..

  • Lucy Lockett on Apr 4, 2008

    Simple words but a loving promise.

  • nobert soloria bermosa on Apr 4, 2008

    thanks a lot guys,,,

    they are well appreciated

  • Josey on Apr 4, 2008

    Lovely poem.

  • Liane Schmidt on Apr 5, 2008

    Very beautiful.

    Best wishes.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • nobert soloria bermosa on Apr 5, 2008

    i never thought this would happen to me… i really can’t explain what i feel….,great writers like you still have a time to read and post a comment to a neophyte like me..it feels great..
    thanks a lot Liane,
    God Bless

  • Francie on Apr 5, 2008

    Delightful poem!

  • nobert soloria bermosa on Apr 5, 2008

    thanks a lot Francie for dropping by and posting a comment…
    they are very much appreciated

  • Judy Sheldon on Apr 5, 2008

    Nobert, this is a very sweet poem pledging love and loyalty. Any woman would be honored to receive such a poem.

    Nobert, you will find that we have a warm family of writers at Triond. They are unlike any at any other network. Welcome and God bless.

  • nobert soloria bermosa on Apr 5, 2008

    thank you so much for your encouraging words Cynthia and Judy. they are well appreciated.

    Judy, yes you are true to your statement that family of writers at Triond are very warm people,, i’m starting to feel it… i love it and it feels good…
    thanks for those wonderful comments…
    they inspire me more..

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