A poem about a Question–

Such hostility fills the air.

Like wasps aroused,

We snap and jockey for position,

Relenetlessly exaggerating our own importance.

Shan’t we all be happier as honey bees?

Copyright/All rights reserved Audrey Howitt 2011

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  • FX777222999 on Sep 20, 2011

    Good poem breeds amazing feeling. Great!

  • KittyK on Sep 21, 2011

    Excellent poem and wonderful words…

  • Audrey Howitt on Sep 21, 2011

    Thank you Fx and KittyK!!

  • binyumanyun on Oct 3, 2011

    nice poem..

  • Jsqc Writer on Jan 23, 2012

    A fascinating well-expressed poem.

  • Audrey Howitt on Jan 23, 2012

    Thank you binyumanyun and Jsqc Writer!

  • Daniel Crompton on Jan 27, 2012

    Seems as though we already are.

  • Audrey Howitt on Jan 27, 2012

    Thank you Daniel!

  • sheilanewton on Mar 1, 2012

    Oh, Audrey – how did i miss this?? Never mind – found it now and WoW what a peom. I’d love to be a honey bee!

  • Lisa Marie Mottert on Apr 11, 2012

    Good one:)

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