Death poem.

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Catching a tiny glimmer of light,

Revealing a red room in sight.

My brain telling me somethings not right,

Shaking I find another fright.

Lying naked on the floor,

The one I once loved and even adored.

Decapitated head rolled over by the door,

I go crazy from all the gore.

Drowning in a pool of pain,

Paint the floor with glass and rain.

Life with walls engulfed in flames,

Afraid to see of I look the same.

What kind of person is this killer,

Belonging to the gate of Hell’s keeper.

Now it’s my turn to meet my maker,

Looking to the heavens for a Savior.

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  • Emma Green on Aug 24, 2009

    Great poem!

  • David Crerand on Aug 24, 2009

    Welcome to the Dark Side! Excellent imagery. Well written.

  • Francy on Aug 24, 2009

    very beautiful as always
    Keep sharing

  • Darla Cooke on Aug 24, 2009

    Very interesting poem.

  • STEVE666 on Aug 24, 2009

    Nice and gory—love it!

  • Marie Milton on Aug 24, 2009

    I believe this to be the dark side of your imagination : )), I LOVE IT!!!

  • Collette Edwards on Aug 24, 2009

    very impressive … LOVE IT!! :D

  • jesse lennon on Aug 24, 2009

    A little stricken by the picture,but it fills in well the piece,magnifenct

  • willie wondka on Aug 24, 2009

    brilliant.

  • giftarist on Aug 24, 2009

    Well written…creative

  • Atanacio on Aug 24, 2009

    My God I loved it!

  • Tanya Wallace on Sep 1, 2009

    Loved it!Great dark and deep subject to write about I particularily liked the ending!!!Great stuff!

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