A Rain Haiku

Grace Kathryn on Nov 6, 2009

Tags: Rain, roses, tree

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Haiku.

Large bright red roses

leaning on pine tree

heavy with rain or pain?

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LOVELYHONEY on Nov 6, 2009
Darla Smith taught

me how to write haiku

5 7 5 will do
Lorenzo A. Fernandez Jr. on Nov 7, 2009
Very good, there’s human element on this, only don’t strictly adhere to the 5-7-5 rule…only amateur does.

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