She is something special…..my Rare Rose in a garden of weeds. :)

I’m looking for something different, something eyes barely see

A strong unthorned stem, a big heart that’s pure and clean

On the breezy cold night, the ocean was brought to me

I drowned in your eyes, with thoughts who is she?

Could I tell this would be special? Was it meant to cross my path?

Only time will tell, so I flipped my hour glass

The Lord will make a call, now the Angels have the scoop

Planting my seed of devotion, intertwined with her roots

Now the soil has been broken, we are growing deep within

Building something special, can’t you see these hearts are twins?

You blossom in my eyes, like pedals soft and sweet

You can’t be picked at all, you are gorgeous and unique

Love, trust, honesty…passionate, caring, modestly

Loyal, wise, enchantingly, connected forever eternally

No one will ever see, and no one will ever find

From a valley to the sea, what’s’ been blessed as all mine

I feel special in this instance, with this world as my witness

We connect while we’re in this, an intense kiss is endless

I have my own valley, it’s the one the Lord chose

And what lies in my possession, is called “A Rare Rose”

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  • Andrea on Jun 10, 2011

    This is my favorite poem :) beautifully written about a beautiful subject I’m sure!

  • Drea on Jul 12, 2011

    Whoever this is about is one lucky girl <3 The best poem ever!

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