A Rose is Most Beautiful When It is Given Away

Shirley Shuler on Sep 28, 2009

Tags: admirer, beautiful, flourishing, glorying, glowing, languishing, light, magnetizing, mesmerizing, rose

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There in the light it lay…

Rose of light

Mesmerizing beauty

Magnetizing me

Feeling it’s presence

Flourishing before me

Drawing life from the good earth

Sunshine radiating

Rain falling softly

Thanking nature for it’s kindness

Ready to be picked and admirer

Languishing, glorying, glowing

Knowing a rose is most beautiful

when it is given away

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Comments (6)

Ruby Hawk on Sep 28, 2009
You are right, a gift is more beautiful.
cutedrishti8 on Sep 28, 2009
great wordings..thanks
Lady Sunshine on Sep 30, 2009
How lovely, Shirley! A rose given away is a beautiful gift indeed!
giftarist on Sep 30, 2009
Nice piece! Lovely!
Jane Jane on Oct 3, 2009
I totally agree with you. A rose is most beautiful when it is given away but sometimes sad to see it being cut off, given away and wither.
Valerie Curtiss on Oct 26, 2009
Nice thought and nice poem

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