Influenced by Shakespeare’s Romeo and Julie, "A Scratch" highlights the scratches that we receive in life and could prove fatal if we allow it.
I thought about Mercutio the other day, out of the blue.
Perhaps, it was the paper cut, ever so slight, when
Mercutio’s fatal words dipped from nowhere, “A scratch…
but tis enough.” I wasn’t hurting that bad. Truly it was
a mere scratch, nothing that would set off a revolution
among my family and the family next door.
Perhaps, I was thinking about how dismal life can be,
all bottled up inside like my mother’s peaches she canned
in August of every year—tight and placed one by one
until they ached for space and light, room to breath.
Then the gooey juice dribbled over them, creating air pockets
that mother squished out with a regular table knife, moving
from side to side, pressing ever so gently, until all the bubbles,
pushed their way to surface and out. I was amazed
how a mere table knife could maneuver air pockets to dissipate.
Perhaps, for some, a mere table knife would maneuver their air pockets to subside.
Perhaps, for others, this mere table knife could be used for more
than just squeezing out life’s bubbles.
Perhaps, we could use it to spread the jams of the world,
across the wheat and rye breads of confrontation, those quiet ones
or maybe even the loud ones we hear about through CNN.com
and the rest of world that thrives on news bits, scrolling surreptitiously
at the bottom of newscasts on television and headers on the Internet.
Perhaps, my mother knew the simplicity of peach making
and that’s why she did it only in August, knowing full well
that if she did in other months, her life would surreptitiously
scroll along the bottom of somebody’s journal and she didn’t want
that to happen, just because it was her life,
her life, Mercutio, her scratch and no one else’s.
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