Every couple needs to get away on occasion and just be by yourself.I dreamed this up going on an idea an ex boyfriend gave me.

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Here we are on a perfect moonlight night,

two star bound lovers out for an adventure.

But we arent going to go mountain climbing,

our adventure has more of an erotic nature.

****

Did you say that you stored some wine here to?

If you didn’t the juice we brought will have to do.

Cuddle up in front of the roaring fire and talk,

but you know what I really want the most now.

****

Please stand up as I remove your shirt and pants,

admiring again your long arms and strong legs.

I like the fact that you have again come prepared,

a radio and an assortment of oils are stored nearby.

****

You waste no time removing my jeans and shirt,

the rest of my garments follow suit very quickly.

You like the way the fire makes my skin glow,

looking forward to exploring mountains and valleys.

****

A walk in a sugar cane field would be fine by me,

I may fine one that will turn the passion button on.

But it’s getting very hard to keep my thoughts straight,

for you are giving me kisses just as hot as the fire.

****

A night of passionate lovemaking is on our agenda,

Burning our sexual energy as the fire slowly dies down.

But all to soon we have to leave and go join the living,

Hopefully we can do our secret rendezvous again soon.

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Comments (5)
  • Christine Ramsay on Jun 5, 2009

    A very romantic and passionate piece.

    Christine

  • George W Whitehead on Jun 5, 2009

    Now look here, the Artist Formerly Known as Payge. This is hot, hot, hot! Well done.

  • poet09 on Jun 5, 2009

    Well done, its hot and put you in the mood.

  • KathySpring on Jun 6, 2009

    That was a pretty powerful piece. I liked you way you come up with the idea, your flow and rhythm…..beautifully done.

    Keep up the Good Work

    Kathy

  • ken bultman on Jun 6, 2009

    Whew!

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