Some hearts can be too sensitive, but some can be too hard.

Image by Mike “Dakinewavamon” Kline via Flickr

My heart sometimes feels

way more than it should.

I ask myself,

why does it always seem

to happen this way?

The answer comes back

in my head to say -

that I am human

and humans are weak

tending to fray,

and thoughts do sometimes stray.

I classify myself as weak,

but really it isn’t that at all.

It takes on a much higher order

which is that of being meek,

so to speak,

often allowing a situation to exist,

a situation I cannot resist.

That is not where the problem lies.

I can sometimes be very wise.

The problem is sharing.

I am more into pairing.

A little old-fashioned some would say -

that may be, but it is my way.

I allow myself to easily get hurt,

even down to a word

that seems a little curt.

I can be too sensitive at times,

that is true,

but I would rather be guilty of that

than to have a hardened heart

that is unimpactable too.

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  • Michael Eboh on Apr 12, 2010

    Interesting share. Thanks.

  • jimbob1 on Apr 12, 2010

    DB…I like this poem a lot…maybe it is because I can identify quite well with the sentiments you have expressed here…sometimes our skin can be too thin or our hearts to sensitive which can sometimes result in misunderstanding or misinterpreting what someone else might have said…typical of what you heard is not what I said!!! Great job and as a result you earned another of my I Like It votes…what else is new???

  • VTech on Apr 12, 2010

    Good Article , Thanks .

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