so Sunshine, is this like two past lives coming together or is sort of a Deju Vu? I think I spelled it correctly. Nevertheless I like the format and the style. Frank

In this poem the speaker seems to have met the person she was meant to be with, as if their mutual want and love had been arranged. It’s a nice literary device.

Nice one…I like it….

I like the idea of two past lives coming together. Two souls cut from the same cloth returning one as sewn by the fabric of time.

Only one man managed to send shiver up my spine, but we parted and each of us happily moved on with our lives. The one I am with now, shake rattle and roll my heart Beautiful write my friend!

great article

Hi Lady Sunshine, just reading this sent a shiver up my spine!

The past have come back to haunt. That’s sure way to feel a shiver.Cool writing style.

Soul mates or twin souls?… Lovely piece

one has giving me the shiver, only once.
I was blown away, was young and very impressionable,
he was not mine to have , but still I will never forget that feeling.

That was some spine tingling lines for a spine tingling romance.

Remembering love from a past life does send awesome shivers throughout the entire body! Nice that we can still have that…..”Knowing each other when” feelings come alive. Good write!

You have the knack…the talent. I could almost see you quivvering.

You expressed your feelings so well in this piece.

Christine